Cute

well great story

I like the small Story and luffy as a Girl soooo cute. Please more, i'm sure oyu could make a good yuri Story out of it.

This. Is. So. Cute! You NEED more reviewers/readers/fans/favourite-ers (is that even a word?)/OBSESSIVE FANGIRLS (or fanboys) WHO LOVE YOUR WRITING. THIS IS AMAAAAAAZING. THANKYOUSOOOOOOMUCH FOR MAKING A GENDERBENT LUNA; I can't find a good one anywhere! *insert more words of praise because I'm too tired to think of more; it's 11:42pm where I live*

wow tht was pretty damn interesting. would be cool if u made a continuation of this

Oh my. Luffy needs to brush up on his seduction skills.

Bank should take advantage of this situation; she cant get pregnant, but she could really enjoy herself!

My apologies for all the typos in my review btw. I was using voice typing on my phone and kind of overlooked numerous grammatical errors, sentence structure issues and a few sentences that simply didn't make a load of sense in my excitement -_- That is my mistake and I'm deeply sorry about that :/ I should've double checked.

honestly, I think the way you've characterized Nami and Luffy in the story is absolutely perfect. This is exactly what I would imagine an intimate relationship with them would be like. Not so much the sequence of events, but in the way they play off of one another. The play between surprising insight and idiocy that is the paradox called Luffy. And the bundle of secrecy, confidence, cunning and emotional obscurity that is Nami. While your story is certainly tantalizing, it's the way you've written these two that I find fascinating. a good Fic doesn't necessarily have to have a complex or particularly deep plot for it to be extremely enjoyable and the simple intricacies you include make such a simple concept deeply enjoyable. Many have done fix that try to balance smart and genuine relationship development, but I can't recall coming across one that has managed to do so in a way that is both true to the characters and honest to how people are in real life as well. Its in my opinion spot on how quickly you have Luffy turn from innocence to craving fulfillment of base desires given that he has always had hedonism and selfishness as a large part of his persona. I can't wait to read more from you :-) You're doing a fantastic job so far. Though I can see why this doesn't have more reviews (the title doesn't hint at how good your writing really is, given how simple the plot is) it honestly deserves many many more.

Update

I'm leaving a comment cuz I like this fic :)
Ooh, and please, please, PLEASE write more, even if this is supposed to be the ending. Just a little more, pretty pretty please?

Plsssss make a sex scene plssssssssssssssss

the story was good but I don't like how nami was acting in the story I hate it wen writers make the women so goddamn mean like come on You know I get it if there's like a slap to the back of the head every once in a wail or something thrown at them every now and then. but shit man not like in this story I felt that nami was hitting luffey every five fucking minuet's but other then that it was a good story.

Nice

Idiot. Of course it was good