hey is this supposed to be after the dragon came? Because thorin is too old to be erebor, he was only a child when the dragon came. Or did you change those details for the sake of your timeline? Adorable story btw

Interesting. You never really see Frerin depicted as being more like Fili. Normally people put him resembling Kali more. I rather liked the change. Well-written, entertaining, and an enjoyable story overall. Well done.

I greatly enjoyed this! Thank you for sharing it! (and yeah, I always picture Frerin as dark-headed like his brother and sister, but all the stories of having Fili looking like his uncle-and because of the movie, Fili is permanently blonde in my mind's eye :)-anyway, I'm slowly coming around :)

Squee! This was so sweet! I love big brother Thorin!

Great story ! I love it !

Lovely writing, ma'am :) Your personifications are spot on 3 You're a master at teasing out the warm fuzzies!