Reviews for The Secret Vanilla Obsession, Among Other Things
kloradori chapter 1 . 4/17
I loved this while reading, but even more so when I realized that this is supposed to take place during that summer. Makes it so much better.
hokkman04 chapter 1 . 8/15/2019
So freaking cute! I really hope you write more of these because you write Steven's POV so well!
Logy chapter 1 . 2/20/2018
Adorable!
Margareitha Malfoy-Nott chapter 1 . 12/24/2016
So adorable. Love it!
107derwent chapter 1 . 3/21/2016
God, that was good! At first I thought that the timeline would be way ahead when they were already officially dating, but the fact that this was still during the summer fling made it even more awesome!

The cutest thing ever is that he changed the record player position so he would get comfy sleeping in his bed. aaaaw! damn cute! I also loved all the things he didn't mind doing for her, especially because all of them seem to be things he would SO hate to do.

"He knew that he was just "Steven" to her. And that was perfectly fine with him as long as he could be something to her." - kill me right now! lol :D

Thank you soooo much for sharing this! Can't tell how much I enjoyed reading this one-shot! Hope you're still there writing!
Bellatrix0515 chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
I really enjoyed this :) The last line is a great touch. And the thing about sniffing the vanilla extract lol! Great job.
pia-lexandra chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
I love it! So sweet.
margtyrell chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
Oh, this is precious. Fluff makes my heart hurt, but in a good way. ;3

Wonderful piece.
hanselnext chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
Lovely one-shot, very fluffy and sweet.

He didn't mind staying up late in her room and watching her roll her hair in fat, pink curlers before crawling in bed beside him. He didn't mind helping her arrange her stuffed animals in alphabetical order according to their names or sitting at her dining room table helping her remove the red jellybeans from a container of candy because those are the only ones she likes.

- Hyde's in deep and he's got it bad for Jackie if he's willing to do all this for her. Its love. :D

He knew that it wasn't just sex for her. She wasn't like that; she wasn't slutty like other girls he knew. She didn't just sleep with anyone. She'd only had one boyfriend in her life.

- I like that you mention this and that Hyde knows this is true about Jackie. To me Jackie has never been the type of girl that would have sex with someone who wasn't her boyfriend. Sex is special to her and she wouldn't have sex with some random guy.

He knew that he was just "Steven" to her. And that was perfectly fine with him as long as he could be something to her.

- Aww. I love how in love he is with her. Great job in capturing Hyde's feelings and thoughts. I enjoyed this one-shot and look forward to whatever else you decide to write.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
loved the fic. sorry it's over.
Aldrean Treu Peri chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
Yay :) so sweet 3
DominoTyler chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
That was sweet! Fluff is always nice. :)
Anana553 chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
Great job! Loved your fluffy story
MistyMountainHop chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
This one-shot has a terrific tone throughout, and it shows us how emotionally engaged Hyde is with Jackie. He's fallen for her hard, and I enjoyed experiencing how *he's* experiencing Jackie at this point in their relationship.

Comments on specific lines below.

(She smelled like a walking cupcake) - I love this line.

("What the hell are you doing sniffing my vanilla?" and then threatened, "If I catch you sniffing my vanilla the only thing you're gonna be smelling is my foot up your ass.") - LOLOL

(He didn't mind helping her arrange her stuffed animals in alphabetical order according to their names or sitting at her dining room table helping her remove the red jellybeans from a container of candy because those are the only ones she likes.) - Aww, that's so sweet of him (and adorable images both).

(He knew that he was just "Steven" to her. And that was perfectly fine with him as long as he could be something to her.) - This is lovely. *heart*

(And he prayed to God that Michael Kelso would never come back from California.) - What a great ending!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
I really like it. I love sweet Hyde.
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