| Reviews for Strive to be Perfect |
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SakuraFromJapan chapter 11 . 6/17/2018 Wow ! The best weight loss/weight gain fanfic featuring lovey-dovey Anakin/Obi-Wan ! :D Thank you for writing this wonderful story ! :) 3 |
WTF chapter 11 . 12/16/2013 you poor fucking weirdo. what shitty kink story is this? |
skyguyalltheway chapter 11 . 7/28/2013 This ending was not weak! It's was amazing! I can't... I just... Oh Force. This story was so emotional. Maybe it's just me, but I was freaking out. I was just about ready to die if it had had a sad ending. Amazing job! |
Aralas Baggins chapter 11 . 6/8/2013 Feels! Sweet ending xx |
riverclan135 chapter 1 . 5/24/2013 so good! |
99999Abandoned-Account99999 chapter 11 . 5/24/2013 ... io;dlfkspdfjlml AWWWWW. Agh, the fluff. THE FLUFF. I can't handle these fluffy feels. The ending was perfect, a nice way to wrap things up by coming back to what originally started this all. Obi-Wan being back in shape is perfect ("pudgy old man" is sexy Obes don't say it's not). And yay for Anakin waking up from the coma. They're space Jedi husbands now too. *sobs and eats a container of ice cream* |
dragonpearlz chapter 9 . 5/23/2013 YAY! *bounces up and down in the elevator scaring those around me* THANK YOU! I can't wait to read more! I 3 Master Che SOOO much! Especially for smacking Ani... and when he twitches away from having it happen again. Be careful, you may find yourself credited for an awesome character in one of my next stories! |
99999Abandoned-Account99999 chapter 9 . 5/23/2013 This was a wonderful addition to the story! Finally, Obi-Wan is starting to realize what Anakin is willing to do to help him (and also, Anakin's whining was amusing since he's a whine bag). Master Che is the type of Healer who will smack Anakin and Obi-Wan and be one of the few people to get away with that (others being Bant, Yoda, and Mace Windu). Anakin flipping out once again was spot-on, of course, even though it was just a cold. People shouldn't use big words to Anakin Skywalker. He can only beat people at Scrabble by eating the pieces anyway. |
Ellie chapter 8 . 5/22/2013 Awwwww I love this story so much, so sweet and angsty. Please update soon, I can't wait to read more :) An idea for future chapters: Anakin keeps his word and starts eating only when Obi-Wan does. Poor Obi won't let Anakin suffer because of him, so he starts eating and then secretly throwing up, and he gets quite good at it so Anakin won't find out until Obi gets really really sick. And (I'm probably going to get flamed for suggesting this :), I would actually like to see an ending where Obi-Wan does die... I'm weird, I know :) |
dragonpearlz chapter 8 . 5/20/2013 Awww.. That's so sweet! Okay so other chapters - well I begged in my last comment, so let's try new ones: - A chapter where Obi & Ani eat together and it goes we - A chapter where they eat together and it doesn't - A chapter where Obi refuses to eat, so Ani does and it creates an arguement, so Obi eats and gets sick - and one where he eats but doesnt get sick - A chapter where Ani doesn't want to eat, but Obi does. Obi thnks something wrong with Ani, but Ani's just stressed about something unrelated. - A chapter where Ani snaps at Obi and it's taken completely wrong - Another few chapers with your healer. She's a pip! I'll think of more -just don't stop writing! |
dragonpearlz chapter 7 . 5/20/2013 HOMG... so good. So creepily correct... do you know someone with an eating disorder? Also, yea it's me and you've "known" me for years... so maybe just a little Obi-Wan cold? Just a teeny one? Or a stomach bug? Though I think a cold would be dreamy. Yea yea, I have issues. This isn't new. :) |
hmm chapter 8 . 5/20/2013 An ending where Obi-Wan doesn't die...Maybe if when they both hadn't been eating for a while, Anakin started acting way weaker than he felt so that Obi-Wan decided that he'd rather eat and risk Anakin leaving him than let Anakin get any worse. Or if Obi-Wan passed out because he was so weak, and he ended up in the Healer's being pumped full of nutrients. I dunno. |
99999Abandoned-Account99999 chapter 8 . 5/20/2013 This was probably the best chapter so far. Anakin's insistence that he'll only eat what and when Obi-Wan does was perfect. He would certainly do that. And the description of how hungry Obi-Wan was so that he ended up eating all the cake (although, damn, Obes, not even I can eat a whole cake) was very vivid. I especially loved how Obi-Wan basically told his inner voice to shut the hell up at one point. But but, you HAVE to have a happy ending. And happy endings mean nobody's dead. C'mon, let me help drag a happy ending from the depths of your brain in PMs. You know you want happiness for The Team... |
99999Abandoned-Account99999 chapter 7 . 5/20/2013 Of course you had to have that last sentence. Of course. This chapter was excellent and the content makes up for the shortness of it. I loved the detail of how resistant Obi-Wan was at first, and their banter over the Jello (Obi-Wan is right about Anakin being crazy for liking the green Jello). |
dragonpearlz chapter 5 . 5/19/2013 no no no - let the angst flow. It's delisiously brilliant. |