| Reviews for Betwixt mine eye and heart |
|---|
   Kuma Dzurui chapter 14 . 8/18/2019 Fantastic! Brilliant! Magnificent! |
| DrunkOnPancakes chapter 14 . 12/14/2015 Guh. Your writing style is amazing and descriptive. I like how you have captured the voices of your characters as well. It takes skill to be able to write dialogue in a way you can actually hear the actors/characters say them. Props for that. Can't wait for more. |
| Guest chapter 14 . 11/22/2015 PLEASE write more smutty DoctorXRiver! I love anything written by you, but this and Nights that Glitter Gold are my favorite! |
| BeautifulandBroken chapter 5 . 6/13/2014 Yum! They are some naughty time lords! :) Great job as always. |
| BeautifulandBroken chapter 4 . 6/12/2014 Amazing! WOW. The Doctor is such a naughty boy in this chapter. Of course, River didn't take him to her office. Haha! That is such a River thing to do! No wonder she drives him crazy! Loved this chapter. Reads just like an episode again except for the naughty bits. Dazzy |
| BeautifulandBroken chapter 3 . 6/8/2014 A shower with the Doctor sounds oh so enticing! But seriously, I really enjoyed this sweet chapter even thouh the last line was so depressing. Great job! Definitely looking forward to reading more. Dazzy |
| BeautifulandBroken chapter 2 . 6/7/2014 Wow, all I can say is wow! Such an amazing chapter. This reads just like a script of the show! Except for the obvious parts, which were absolutely jaw-dropping. Heehee. The Doctor and River were always my favorite pairing watching the show , and we were in some ways robbed of their relationship. Your writing is so brilliant and spot-on. I feel as if I'm one of River's students, observing it right along with the Doctor. You write them both flawlessly and their playful banter is always comical and exciting to experience. Thank you so much for writing and I definitely will be back to read more! Dazzy |
| BeautifulandBroken chapter 1 . 6/7/2014 Great beginning! You've definitely drawn me in! |
| EpicOrb chapter 6 . 2/14/2014 I adore this story. Cant wait to read more. Hope its still going to be continued. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/30/2013 This is great! Please give us more chapters ;) |
| astraldreamer chapter 5 . 9/19/2013 loving it ... more! |
| Mr-Song-Mrs-Doctor chapter 5 . 9/6/2013 I LOVE this story ') |
| Gwynne chapter 5 . 9/6/2013 Beautiful story. My heart aches for the Doctor when he has to leave (if he has to leave). Imagine the horror of living after he has "recovered" River. I can't wait to see what else you'll write. Bravo! |
| Luli chapter 2 . 9/6/2013 That just beautiful. So, well written that I could feel the Doctor's heartbreak. Poor thing. The sex was hawt! |
| stellarthought chapter 1 . 8/22/2013 This story is TO DIE FOR! Please update! I hope you haven't given up :(:(:(:( Desperately waiting for more! |
