| Reviews for The Adventure Ends |
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Blonde-Eko chapter 7 . 6/5/2014 How touching, the bit with Osamu's death was so well done, congrats! Quality story, I shall have to see where the next bit is, if you have done a story which continues this plot :D |
Blonde-Eko chapter 6 . 6/5/2014 They make it back to the digital world, yay! I guess logically it had to happen but I'm still pleased for them that it was rather speedy, not many years like in the series. Again, great chapter :} |
Blonde-Eko chapter 5 . 6/5/2014 Oooh, sweet. What a fascinating curve ball you threw here. The parting between Wormmon and Ken was beautifully done too by the way. Thoroughly enjoyable read, this story is. |
Blonde-Eko chapter 4 . 6/5/2014 Good work incorporating Ken into the adventures so seamlessly. You have entwinned him into the story naturally, without making him dominate (as could be an issue when rewriting a character into a pre-existing storyline) yet still keeping his presence strong and his impact felt. This is a great story, way to go! :D |
Blonde-Eko chapter 3 . 6/5/2014 Poor Ken! I like how you showed the lead up to him joining the digidestined, it was good. And you did very well with showing the insecurities he is battling with thanks to Osamu. Tragic but effective in showing why Ken is the way he is. |
Blonde-Eko chapter 2 . 6/5/2014 What a touching chapter. You have Ken's character very well done here and him finding his crest and realising he is someone special is so touching. Nice work! |
Blonde-Eko chapter 1 . 6/5/2014 Hi! I just got a review from you on my new fic and wanted to review you back, but then I saw this story and having just read the first chapter I am hooked :D The idea of Ken being involved with the original digidestined is such an intriguing one to me and finding someone else who has written something along these lines is exciting. I can't wait to read on and see how you make it play out :D So thank you for reading my story earlier, I really appreciate it. And now I'm excited as it seems great minds think alike ;) haha Definitely a story to click onto the favourite list... |
Alli-dunno chapter 7 . 10/12/2013 I really, really liked this. I always wondered why Ken had a crest and why he wasn't actually part of the original chosen and if there was any particular reason why he wasn't there. I liked the alternate ending with Hikari vanishing, leading me to wonder what role she'd end up playing in 02 and I like that Ken and Takeru became best friends, because I always thought they'd get along so well if they'd been given the screen time develop a better friendship in the actual 02. I love this 3 |
Safaia Bara chapter 7 . 9/20/2013 I really like where you're taking this- especially the fact that you aren't having Ken pull away from the others after his brother died. And that he and Takeru are best friends. (I think that's awesome!) You're doing a great job, and I'm awaiting the next part of the saga with baited breath! I just hope it's longer! |
CrystalVixen93 chapter 7 . 9/5/2013 Love ur story and hope make a sequel soon plz. |
Digi-fanCatt chapter 7 . 9/2/2013 That's the end? :c It's to sad to be the end! Please more? |
Gogglegirl chapter 6 . 8/26/2013 What's next? I hope they'll find Hikari sooner or later! |
Digi-fanCatt chapter 6 . 8/25/2013 This is a good story, will ken move to odaiba for '02? |
Angelwahalla and Spazwahalla chapter 6 . 8/25/2013 I like this story line please update soon |
SnakeGear chapter 5 . 7/23/2013 So, Hikari is kidnaped and ken didn't reach perfect level, I assume that Hikari's kidnaping is going to be the main plot or a very important part of it, this is intriguing. |