This is truly amazing! I mean, the way you describe everything their feeling, thoughts,and personalities, just perfect O_O this is a good "what if" scenario one with a happy ending of learning to take control and love and be loved. You know instead of HATE the original tekken story has lol. My favorite kazuya/jun love it 3

Lovely. Just lovely. Your use of words fit into the story adequately. I have read this 3 times today and am getting ready for my fourth. Thank you for such an amazing story.

I've read this twice today!
You have to read past the gore moments with Devil K. intrusion i his thoughts, just to really understand the connection that Jun Kazama and Kazuya Mishima! In would have been born to 2 great people and have a different live. I believe Heihachi didn't destroy his son totally, after all Kaz was able to father a child... Sometimes I wish I had the skills and willpower to write my own version of the fatal decision which led them to be taken apart and whatsoever! Every time I look at their boy Jin, I feel such sadness, he's been robbed in this life and had no chance to live in a decent family. We Tekken lovers a quite delusional now! But fan-fiction stories give us plenty to think about. I'm sure that Jun and Kaz together would have defeated the the old patriarch and many other evil ways. Interesting that Lee Shaolan has been left unconcerned by all of this.
Thank you for this story, I hope you could be around to write more about Tekken and this pairing!

I can't believe this, I'm a huge TEKKEN fan and it's so hard to find good stories about Jin's parents among all the drivel you can find here. How did I miss that one, I don't know. Thank you for writing and it was really beautiful to read :-)

WOAH! THIS IS DA BEST FANFIC IVE EVER READ IN MY LIFE! YOU GOTTA TEACH ME YOUR WAYS! YOU ARE TRULY JUST TRULY AWESOME.

very well written especially the parts specifically about Devil and kazuya's internal struggles

Wow... this story was truly BEAUTIFUL. I loved every word of this amazing story between the mysterious and awesome couple :D I was surprised to even find a story of this type and with this kind of atmosphere in it O_O Poor Kazuya, I wish in the actual games he would have won against Devil and be with Jun and his son, but then again there would be no Tekken without the Mishima conflict :p Very frightening and sooo erotic to be in Kazuya's place when there is danger to be had, but I think you ended this story rather well.

*slow clap* This...I'm speechless. Best Tekken fanfic I have read in a LONG time. Thank you sir for this gem. This shall be faved immediately.

this has got to be my all time favorite story written of Kazuya/Jun, its absolutely beautiful