really well written this deserves more attention

This was great! Your writing style is really good and I think you captured Astrid and Hiccup so perfectly. I loved Astrid thinking it was unfair of Hiccup to hide his dragon fighting techniques that could benefit the village—that fits in so well with what we know of her. And the best line was the one about Hiccup always laughing at some cosmic joke only he got—it's a wonderfully written line and I think describes his character perfectly. I really enjoyed this.

I really liked it