Awwww, you just have to love Sally. She's the (second) best mother ever. No one beats my mom. Sorry.

It's heartrending to think that there are actually people who live through this every day. You captured this perfectly and kept Percy and Sally perfectly in character. Amazing job, this story is extreamly well written.

Sad but I loved Percy at the end.

oh my gods I'm crying from this.

this is so sad.

awww poor sally! I really hate gabe but this is really good!

You did a wonderful job portraying Gabe and Sally. Percy is also in character and it is evident that she loves him because she listened to how his day went and tried to protect him from the cruelty that Gabe enforces on her.

poor sally, gabe got what he deserved.

I really love the way you portrayed Sally's relationship with both Paul and Percy. Their personalities were in character, and theq scene at the end with Sally and Percy was so sweet.

Aw, poor Sally :(
I love the story. I really do. Percy's so innocent there.

*Respect to Sally Jackson*
you had captured Sally Jackson quite well.