Very cool story :)

Not a bad short story and for it I give you: Four Bronze Stars.

1) For remembering spaces.
2) For keeping in the genre.
3) For Spelling.
4) For trying.

Hope to see more one day soon.

The Crimson Mage.

Aw this was so sweet! It's nice to see James in a little better light than just a bully to snape! Nicely done! :)