Huh. This was really interesting. It'd have been even better if it was a bit longer~! ;3 And to have some questions answered, like why their spirit children are dying. It'd also be interesting to see how the mortal world around them takes this. (I'm also vindictive enough to be curious about Paulina and Dash's reactions to Danny being the ghost boy, since they're the ones that didn't give a crap about how they treated him, yet they idolized his spirit half.)

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Sequel?

okay...so here is my full review of this story.

Plot/Characters: the plot was interesting, but it was very muddled and didn't really become clear until later on. I would advise you to take some more time to develop it and really reach into it so it wont be so unclear. because of the fact that the plot was so muddled I couldn't really understand if the characters were in character or not. they didn't seem like they did on the series, but then again you took a different route than that in the series. I think that the plot is interesting but needs to be developed more for this story to become really good. C

Setting: there were many settings, but there wasn't a lot of imagery for it so it was hard to comprehend and understand. I would ask you to please add a little more imagery to this story so you can really make the dynamic impact with the vastly different and intricate settings. it just will take a little more work but I could see this becoming a great story. C

Imagery/Grammar/Usage etc.: i'll be blunt. this story is a work in progress. the plot is interesting but lacking in usage of imagery and other usage which makes the story weak and confusing. I think that you may be on to something great here. while I don't like the fact that you're splitting up the families and using kidnapping in a positive light and other things, I can respect and admire the route you are taking with this story. i'm honestly interested to read more. however I do think that there needs to be more imagery, usage of similes and metaphors and other writing styles like that in order to really bring your story to life and make it the best it can be. C

My final grade for this story is a C. that is not a bad grade in the least bit (I don't even review for stories unless I feel like they're worth my time so you've certainly got a good story here). think of it like a diamond with some coal covering it. clean it up, make it shine and you could have an award winning story here. :) I hope to hear from you soon and thank you for allowing me to read your story.

-Kate

o...kay...so let me see if I got this right...
(deep breath)

The Ghost Zone is losing children and therefore they need another one. Clockwork decides to give them Danny Phantom so they kidnap him and basically drug him so he'll believe they're actually his parents...is that about right?
-Kate

wait so clockwork is behind all this?! what?!
-Kate

okay. so Skulker kidnapped Danny (still unclear about how) and basically brainwashed him into believing all sorts of lies...okay...maybe I can get on board with this.
-Kate

still confused. so the orange and blue ghosts are not Maddie and Jack but other ghosts? hmm...
-Kate

wait...why are Maddie, Jack, and Jazz ghosts? i'm so confused...
-Kate

Danny Fenton passed his hunters test? then where is Danny Phantom? curious...
-Kate

love it! keep going! awesome concept and premise by the way!

WHOAH, I was not expecting this. Haha, it took me a couple of chapters to figure it out, but this is actually a really cool thing. I like how you slowly give us more information to figure it out a we keep reading. Very cool.

Please Write more I love it

cool

i just had the epiphany that Danny thinks the humans are ghosts and ghosts are humans.
-throws glitter in air- Do I get a cookie now?

Great chapter, i wanna see more uwu

WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON TO MAKE EMBER AND SKULKER HIS PARENTS!? This is beyond madness dang it! Please try to update this soon:)