Great job on the story,keep up the great work and keep on writing

I loved this so much, thank you for writing it! Enjoyed every chapter!

I would really like to see how it goes rather than how it ended right here.I also want see how their relationship goes on. This is sooo cute

...where's the kiss?

This has to be my favorite fanfic of all time, I must have read it 20 times over at keast, I never get bored of it, it's perfect

Cute story! I wish there was more! Those two make a cute couple. Good job! :)

-Yvonne

I absolutely loved it!im glad that kakashi stopped kyubi from taking naruto away and that he heard sasuke say he had a crush on him.

T-T THe story was so good its hard to let it go. But at least Naruto's happy.

Purrrrrr...

Bad ass story really loved it. Top notch shit.

Really good story I liked it up till the end it felt rushed I wish you would have contuined it or maybe make a sequal showing there relationships progress

Aww! The ending was really cute

You took your time with worthless chapters talking about the pain naruto was having that most of them felt like the same thing with different places... yet you rushed the ending too quickly... i guess 5 /10 for the score of this story... good plot... bad flow

i really liked this story...i am looking forward to more of your work

So, appatently my opinion differs from everyone else's, but whatever, here it comes:
THIS STORY SUCKS.
As much as the concept was interesting (I might actually look up the original story/song/poem/we), the excecution sucked. Neither of any characters in this story has any personality: they just fall in their stereotype role - Naruto being the oh-so-poor-helpless-heroine (using word heroine because this stereotype shows in many shojo); Sasuke is the cool popular jock; Sakura is the mean fangirl etc. Making Naruto self-pity himself CONSTANTLY it's the worst way of making him OOC and damn me, if isn't cruel