Um... just realized a plot holes . One: has she never bled before? If she had, she would have seen the ichor and wonder what the fuck.

In the future, please make it so that ur review responses are PMs. It messes up the word count and makes us think the chapters are longer. Thanks!

Gods and Goddesses are born fully conscious. It makes no sense that Poseidon and Artemis would lock away their daughter's powers, deny her her birthright, turn her mortal and throw her into a demigod life of danger and imminent death. I think having her as Poseidon's daughter with the blessing of Artemis would make way more sense if you're gonna go the demigod route. In any case, Artemis is an Olympian, sure, but she's not overly powerful or particularly interesting. She loathes men and treats them all like crap, she hunts monsters as a past-time, and what else besides the moon? I find it hard to believe that thousands of years of hating men and remaining a virgin Goddess, she would suddenly give it up on a whim to Poseidon, who is a murderer, rapist, and regularly cheats on his wife with mortal women leading him to be the father of numerous bastard children. I get that it's fanfiction and you can do whatever, but there's just this huge glaring hole preventing me from getting into the story. Being the child of one of the Big Three is already immensely powerful. Being a goddess forced into mortal form is a bit much. Plus, you got how gods and goddesses are born wrong, which makes the rest of the story senseless to me.

Please update I would like to know how she would handle the quest for the golden fleece.

Please update soon i love this story so much already

This is one of the best fem!Percy stories I have ever read .

I think Ares would be a good person to pair her up with because she likes sharp things but I also think she would be good with Hermes because she a good liar and I like to think she would be good at pickpocketing and stealing too, and I know gods don't have DNA but Triton is technically her half-brother and Apollo is technically her mothers' full-blooded brother.

apollo

APOOLO

Hestia besto goddess #lovehestia #hestia4ever #hestianoticeme

Hope to read more soon.

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please make a sequeal

this has been a good story please update

This is so great! I look forward to reading more!

I like the story so far but i was wondering why 16? That's quite a bit older than the original age.