Reviews for Trouble Breathing
Shekiah Rosay chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
Wow, that was powerful! Lots of facets of Montparnasse's character... he may have gotten a little OOC when he was ranting, but don't we all when we get that pissed off? Poor Eppie was fantastic though. Nice job!
ponine-cosette chapter 1 . 12/30/2006
Wonderful. I love Montparnasse's brutal honesty, and Eponine's weary reaction.
Mlle. Eponine chapter 1 . 9/26/2006
Interesting side of Montparnasse here...the showman side. I like it! His brutal honesty is chilling but compelling at the same time. Nice job.
C.Bell chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
Brilliant! I do love 'Parnasse/Eppie...he's such a mean bastard but I have to agree with his assessment of our dear 'Ponine here, as cruel as it is. Excellent writing. :-)
Nelja chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
Very dark, and cruel with poor Eponine. But very interesting and original too.
LesMisLoony chapter 1 . 10/25/2004
This is so sweet... in a weird Parnasse way. I'm on a mission to review every Parnasse fic I can find, which isn't many...

But I love this! Really, I do.
AP Especially chapter 1 . 12/19/2002
That... was depressing. And painful. And really, really GOOD! It's got great dialogue and could easily fit into the story. Can't wait for more.
Trashcandy chapter 1 . 11/23/2002
Thoroughly putrid and rotten. Abysmal and crushing; I loved it. Exquisite piece.
greenfairie chapter 1 . 11/19/2002
wow, that was really deep. I like it.
Rhianwen chapter 1 . 8/28/2002
Wow...this was amazing. I love it. Probably one of the best things I've ever read on this page.

*jaunts off to put this on her favourites list*

Ooh! They have a little box to click to do it automatically now! Neat! :o)
AmZ chapter 1 . 8/26/2002
ah yes, Montparnasse at his Montparnassiest. or is it Montparnastiest? same difference. good job!

a_z
mysticalhamster chapter 1 . 8/24/2002
Typical Parnasse. I love this fic. Great job!
Nyx3 chapter 1 . 8/24/2002
ooh, Montparnasse is so mean! Typical him. Poor Eponine. I can't say that I have any critizm for you, beacuse the truth is...this was really, really good. I would like to know what happens next, tho.
Manon chapter 1 . 8/24/2002
Nice guy, 'Parnasse.

I actually think it's very good. It's not pleasant, but it's good.