Gray and juvia are so cute!

This is so cute!

Lovely story, I like Juvia very much in this. I wouldn't call Gray selfless, but the contrast is very striking and very well done.

Tbh, I reviewed just to tell you this, that this one line is absolutely goddamn beautiful: "She has her own demons, she has her own regrets, her own darkness, and he doesn't think he can bear to have her burden his darkness when her own is enough to cause the sky to rumble with thunder and gray with rain."

Just - the best Gruvia line ever. Yes.

I don't even ship this and it's brilliant

I ship this...
I haven't really watched Fairy Tale, only a couple dozen of episodes, but I ship this.
Um, your style of writing is really good for cute pairings...and the stuff that happens in them...

Gray and Juvia are so freaking adorable! I think I officially ship them and it's all because of these two stories of yours! Awesome stories!

WHERES THE KISS ? OTHER THAN THAT AWESOME JOB LOVE THE STORY SO MUCH

niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice.. well played... well played.. *starts slow clap*

Man this seems exactly how Gray would react to that even if some of Juvia's actions get on his nerves. And after seeing the Laxus fight arc I just know Juvia would do this :)

SOBS THIS IS SO PRECIOUS

I love the characterization in this! It's so SPOT ON, THANK YOU, I feel like it's hard to find fics with Gray perfectly in character and this was FLAWLESS. Aw man, him recounting Ur in his explanation towards Juvia, aw man, that was written beautifully. This whole thing was written beautifully! So well done, thank you!

I am sobbing because they are my favorite dorks
and Gray is so awkward and Juvia is so determined
and they are both just selfless people trying to protect each other

My favorite line HAS to be this:
"Your life is not your own anymore, Juvia."
Because their lives have come together, it's not her right to die on him anymore ;A;

This is so damn sweet. You have done an amazing job in keeping them in character, I love it!

So cute and you got it just right. I love gruvia but I hate it when pepole make gray or juvia out of charector however great job and you had them stay in charector :)

awwwww cute! any point in particular or just a random moment
also small nitpick isn't her body made of water? don't most attacks go right through her?
ahh well was sweet regardless and totally in character

sweet! Just sweet! I'm glad you got their characters so perfectly right!