Interesting, please continue.

Please, oh please, oh please write more!

Hi!
Your story is amazing! I really want to continue. Yes, I am a fan of this pair. And you inspired me on the art for them. I have on site of Deviantart. My name there Alexsabath. Look my gallery under that nickname. I'll draw for you.

Author, please sequel! So little is written with this cute pair ((
And your wonderful story))) I would like to know what will happen to them later))

Impatiently waiting for more!

oh eric you clever boy, i must admit, i wasn't sure on this at first, but i rather enjoyed that chapter! its so difficult to find a good fic with presto as one of the main characters. i really hope you carry on with this. i know its a small fandom but, this is really well written and i do want to know what happens next, do they find the others...venger, are they the same or do there travels change them, are they captured, do they save a herd of unicorns...i need to know! :)

this is really good, i hope you carry on, but if you don't, i just wanted you to know that this is a really enjoyable piece.

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Keep up the good work! I love this show, and I love this pairing. There's not enough of it in the world.

Good story so far. I look forward to more updates. I must admit there were some homo-erotic moments between Cavalier and Magician, I thought it was funny.

So I really loved "played a roll of their own" as a clever little dungeons and dragons pun, You've got a very good sharp wit. You also remembered right away that there are four suns which I've seen a lot of authors totally forget.

I love the way you did the combat, it does a good job of being descriptive and feeling hectic without being toooo vague OR going into too much detail, and that style, and especially the initial dialogue feels like it was torn right out of the show, Later on the dialogue becomes more "real" which honestly I think is crucial to actually have any kind of personality or development.

I really like what you did with Presto's magic, you kept the theme of the results being related but not exact. That was done very well.

I really like your narrative style, how occasionally you explain or add in some detail, not long enough that it detracts form the story, but sort of as a... palette cleanser between certain scenes, it keeps the narrative nice and refreshing and keeps it from going overly long .

The absolute most important thing though is that you do more! This must be just the first of many chapters, cause I'm too interested to not see what happens!