I love it so far. I feel for Sasuke so much ugh. Keep it going, thank you.

love it need more please.

aww I love this. I love the way you write. The first three chappies made me smile and giggle and frown while the last two broke my heart. Looking forward for more. 3

More pretty please!

Naruto's real thoughts during his dialogue with Sasuke made me cry.

This is an excellent story so far. Very well written. i will definitely read ch 5 later, and be following for updates!

What!? Now I can't read this! Sorry I'm not a fan of NaruSasu, I really want to read the rest of this to but if I did i'd probably end up crying! I really sorry that I won't read this It's just I can't!
Sorry!

I like this so very much please update soon, I really want Sasuke to ask Naruto about why he didn't talk to him. Update soon I can't wait to read more :)

thank goodness, keep of the goodwork. Cant wait to see this story progress

Hi! Before I start there was two mistakes I saw on chapter 2 I think? Might've been 3, there was a w missing and you said 'hear instead of 'here I'm pretty sure. Right! So I really like this story, although the texts kinda bother me since you know seniors don't really text like that lol, I always have to process the texts, and I don't really like the thought of orochi or kabuto having a main part in this, it just seems almost irrelevant in my opinion, I would however suggest Maybe a bigger role for itachi in the near future, like him also having 'feelings' for naruto too and ya know that can stir up something within sasuke about how he actually feels and whatnot. But thank you very much! I really like where this is going and hope to read more soon! Goodjob!

i think this is the new chapter. at least i don't think i have read it before. i think i would really remember that one particular yukky scene. other than that, it is very well written, as usual. very wonderful descriptions and all that jazz but kinda makes me feel sad for him...;( keep up the good work babe...LOVE u, BHSL!

This is your editor speaking...Ahem. /clears throat/
Missy you better go correct those spelling mistakes and delete those random letters where you bumped the keys. keke other than that no complaints besides the fact you put me through that scene again e 3e still bad but good. lol finally read it hehe your lazy editor... /shifty eyes/ what else can I say your a great writer dear

SAD! That's just seems so painful..poor naruto..

I just feel like his making everything complicated, that it's just so sad..

I want to skip the whole angst and get on to the romance! But i know i couldn't do that..i need to be patient..

All and all i love it!

Keep up the good work!

P.s. So would shika and kiba be a side pairing? I hope its a ShikaxKiba pair.

Good story! I've liked it a lot so far, keep up the good work. The tension Naruto feels between everyone and himself is unbearable haha!

its good its good...but please updatw soon...really want this..