Loving the story - even if I've never read Wolf Rain. Or watched, bc I don't know if it's a book or a movie/show. Hagrid called Cheza Hedwig in his letter btw.

you are writing a fem harry potter story. but keep calling her a him

And finally mistake of this fic, Heather says shes not famous where she's going, except thats only said in the books because the Dursleys hate Harry and do everything in their power to belittle him, the pack does not do that so that line is entirely unnessecary

'Poor ground, what has it ever done to you Snape?'

I can just imagine Snape hearing that thought and making a confused expression That clues Heather into his mind reading

Uh wait...they know about the Stone already? When Heather is explaining to Ron how a smart thief might make it look like someone else is trying to take it, but at this point they haven't figured out what the package is yet, unless I missed something, did I?

Your obviously copying from the book. I'm finding small mistakes here and there, its not too noticeable if you aren't looking for it but you may want to go bk and read your own story and fix it.

The 2 I've noticed before are:

1. In Hagrid's letter just before the first Portions class you didn't fix the snowy owl's name from Hedwig to Cheza. I wrote that mistake off as possibly Hagrid not understanding the significance of the name Cheza and believing Hedwig is a better name.

2. At the end of this chapter you left the sentence as "there are just some things..."knocking out" a troll is one of them. That should be "killing a troll"

If I spot anymore of these mistakes I'll leave a review to point them out so you can fix them if you like. I would fix them too, the Admins and mods (and former mods) on this site can be very stingy about direct content. I learned the hard way and this seems like a decent story, I really don't wanna see it taken down because you missed fixable mistakes

Why can't they howl like normal wolves instead of sing like in Alpha and Omega?

There are some good people in Slytherin you know. It's mean to single a house out just because of what some people did.

Great story I really liked it good job writing the story.

I liked the idea of her getting an animal dorm other than wolf so if possible could you make her a bird animagus?

You keep calling heather a him btw

this is incredible. I had to rethink my top ten fabrics because of this. please, please, please continue this

This is a great story hope you update it soon

Please don't pair Tsume with anyone other than Toboe. They are too perfect together to be shipped with someone else!

Cheza died!? Sobs in a corner