| Reviews for Superior |
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JustAnotherCrazedFangirl chapter 10 . 5/3 good story, as per usual. I like the way this ended. |
Font45 chapter 10 . 1/29 Brilliant story. I'm a water fountain over here. |
emirose3323 chapter 10 . 8/5/2018 I'm never prepared for the emotional roller coaster you put me on, but hot damn do I enjoy the ride. |
Ju-Geo chapter 10 . 4/2/2018 You’re such a great writer. I hope you never stop because I’ll definitely keep checking back on your page. I anticipated Yuki’s death but your note on the last chapter was honestly what tugged at my heartstrings. Fortunately, I’ve yet to experience the death of a loved one, but I have experienced my first adopted cat dying beside me while I played on my laptop. I wish I just stayed by his side instead of getting distracted when I thought he was just going to rest... little did I know that his slumber would last forever. Anyways, keep writing and embarking with us your experiences. You are truly appreciated c: |
Quavers chapter 10 . 11/2/2017 This is why I don't read tragedies, I'm sobbing. What a masterpiece. |
dianalillian chapter 10 . 6/23/2017 You have fulfilled my KagamixOC fanfic dream. Granted, I normally stray away from stories with potentially tragic endings. (I could just feel it in my bones that this story will be tragic, so I dropped the story at chapter 3 to save myself from the heartbreak). But, somehow, I'm always led back to this story. Though it was tragic, it was undeniably beautiful. :))) More power to you. |
Freiana chapter 10 . 12/6/2016 so sad made me cry but i loved the story so much! |
NinjaPenguinLover chapter 10 . 12/1/2016 I just spend a whole fucking chapter bowling my eyes out, I hope you're happy, because I AM NOT. One of the better tragedy fictions I've read, well exectued, and it fucking hurt like a blow to the gut. |
JustAnotheAnimeFan chapter 10 . 7/10/2016 *slow claps* Congratulations... you managed to break my heart in 21,000 words. This was writen wonderfully and the moment i heard about the condition i knew it was coming... but the way you wrote in her death hit me like a truck. (but in a good way?). But... it was a great read! Well done, well done! |
frailityofgenius chapter 10 . 5/12/2016 Wow. I know you that reality and life are unfair, but I can't help but wish that she didn't have to die. It's a beautiful ending though, truly, your writing is amazing and the way you described Kagami's 'break down' at the end is just wow. You made me feel the characters and feel every emotion they went through and more (which in my opinion is the greatest talent a writer can have; drawing feelings and emotions from people). I am deeply grateful to be able to read your stories (I've been reading like all of them tonight lol) and it honestly feels like an honor to have been on this journey with you, telling the story of Yuki and Kagami. Absolutely beautiful. |
AZ1087653 chapter 10 . 10/14/2015 Such a bittersweet tale and Yuki was so cute. She and Kagami would have been very happy together. Hopefully he always keeps her in his heart. |
JDominique37 chapter 9 . 10/9/2015 Oh, I am definitely crying. I can't say anything more. Just . . . I can't . . . |
JDominique37 chapter 7 . 10/9/2015 Ah |
JDominique37 chapter 6 . 10/9/2015 Aw, such a sweet chapter! The party was cute and their kiss was so adorable. You're great at writing relationships and romance! |
JDominique37 chapter 5 . 10/9/2015 I laughed out loud when Kuroko asked Kagami if he only thought about basketball. Oh, Kagami-kun. Nice chapter! |