ya finish

Yay! I am excited to see what’s to come, it’s always interesting seeing how people’s writing styles change over time, keep up the good work I’ll be reading it!

okey dokey! I'm excited for what is to come!

Friggen. Amazing.

Please continue, I support this and your writing skills go past Four's height.
Love,
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Great chapter

I liked the chapter.

Hi. You are an AMAZING WRITER! This is the 10th story today that the witer stopped short at a climax. It's really frustrating, because you guys are soo talented, and should'nt stop. If you get a chance I'd love to know how Renee and Uriah work out, who stopped Iz, and how badly Tris crushes Marina after messing with the inseparable FOURTRIS!

That girl is me. Your awesome. Are personalities make us twins

I am friends with a guy names Dakota and you described him exactly, it was kind of creepy and funny at the same time.
I like your writing style and I am excited to see where this goes.

I really like this story and its not just because it has my name in it.

Who is it?

This is really good writing, and I love your style. You should watch out for grammar though. In particular, you lack commas, and a few of your sentences are not properly formatted. Also, watch out for pronoun usage...
Thank you for the TOD! Love the plot line; although it isn't unique, you seem to be adding some strange unidentifiable twist to it.
Keep going! Update soon!
(I apologize for any mistakes in the review... I am using my phone instead of my computer)

FactionMixer

i like the part of the chicken hilarious

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! This is really good so far1