Dude, I never even liked NCIS, but this is gold.

Was Bob Pierson a reference to a certain John Ringo series?

This is a great story, love your characterisation and combat scenes

This is a brilliant well thought out story, i don’t always enjoy AU harry potter but this one really takes the cake.

enjoyed this \ lot, would have liked to have seen more

well written, fun characters, thanks for sharing

great stuff here, nice to see the pair of them in operation together.. and the rest.. thanks for sharing

super

Boy I just love semi-unconventional pairings when it comes to Harry Potter fanfic. This has been a solid fic, and I personally love the very lingo riddden areas, even if they may not be accurate, though you definitely seem to know what you're writing about.

Is that Steve McGatrett an allude to Hawaii 5-0?

Is this story dead? Because I was really enjoying it and was wondering if it would be continued.

I can't believe that this got left alone like this! This was a great story up until this point. I would have loved to be able to read more of it. Well, hopefully you're still alive somewhere and might be able to come back to this eventually.

Love the story so far. Off to check out your other works! Keep it up!

Thank you for the GREAT read! Really enjoy it. Hope you update soon. Thanks again.

I really enjoyed this story. Wish you would continue.

Wish you would update this and Per Aderua. Brilliant literature!