Reviews for Innocent Feelings
Chocolate with cherries chapter 1 . 7/17
Hola, buenos días me podrías pasar un enlace para dirigirme a tu blog y poder seguir leyendo tus historias.
Gracias
zfj chapter 1 . 11/5/2019
This is weird. I skimmed through your notes in your bio and I don’t quite understand. You’ve been on this site for a long time and have seen how things have evolved. Over the past 5 years or so, the quality and quantity of stories has decreased significantly as most of the writers in the 2000-2010 era moved on to other hobbies or became too busy. So, naturally, one might expect less feedback on your stories. Perhaps you are receiving the same amount of hits but not as many reviews. I’d guess it’s because there is less community now and readers are not as engaged, partially because there are not as many quality stories out there. I write and read to escape reality, and I like to share my stories online not because I want reviews, but because I know there are at least a few out there that enjoy them, even if they are not reviewing. I am always blessed if someone goes out of their way to review my story and never took it for granted, nor do I require it. Feedback is nice as it helps you improve as a writer but there are also other ways. I have to admit, it does motivate me to continue to write but usually I write when I feel like it. The least I can do is to submit it to FFnet to share my imagination as I know I make someone’s day, or at least I think I do. Just doing that brings me joy, far more than the number of reviews.
Mystfied Dreams chapter 1 . 10/27/2019
Hey there! I'm sorry to hear that you have experienced negativity on . Its disappointing that you have left the site but I'm a firm believer in doing what is best for you. I hope you have peace now that you have the opportunity to post your amazing and well written stories without hostility.

I'm a casual reader of DBZ but when checking stories on ff, I'd always be sure to check yours out. It would be wonderful to find out what happens next in your works, especially in Innocent Feelings. I found it well written and I'm dying to know Krillin's fate from Chi Chi after Gohan and Videls...time together :).

It would be an honour to have access to your works, so please consider. You'll get no hostility or negativity from me.

Be well and be blessed :D
tus285 chapter 1 . 9/11/2019
Where can I read this? I was looking through your reviews to see if I can get an answer and all I see are really good reviews (well, mostly) pleaseeeee
Ana237 chapter 1 . 9/9/2019
Where can I read this fanfiction. Please I'm very interested in the story u wrote
derektomlinson chapter 1 . 9/4/2019
derek i miss reading your stories you are one of the best authors on this site
FoggyJarl166 chapter 1 . 8/25/2019
Guys stop reviewing and being complete assholes. You losers who don’t have a life and hate on other people’s work are the reason all Cloak quit. So if you could listen to how retarded you are and just stop being jerks maybe you could understand why these stories are gone.
guest chapter 1 . 7/19/2019
OMG what's happend here
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2019
This is stupid and pointless, I had a shitty day looked for something to take the edge off and find this... Regardless of if you come back Im not.
Hahahahahaaa chapter 1 . 6/26/2019
Bitchin' about a lack of reviews when you got nearly 600 on this one story alone! Most are luckiy to even reach 100 and you gonna cry cuz your not recieving 1000 reviews per chapter. What a crybaby. Write for yourself. Not for attention.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/24/2019
Hello I'm disappointed that you would give up when your stories because of few trolls are bothering you and lacking in reviews
Around da world chapter 1 . 6/23/2019
I would have commented again in my normal account but there is only 1 chapter so I have to be a guest to do it again.

Can someone at least tell me what happened in the most recent chapters?

I wanted to wait out a few so I can read any new chapters all in a row, but now it's deleted and I cant find out.

Thanks in advance
Absolute Fury chapter 1 . 6/23/2019
Wait what! WHAT THE FUCK DUDE!
robby21 chapter 1 . 6/23/2019
Damn, you guys are a bunch of assholes. This was one of the great ones on here and you guys had to go and fuck it up. Thanks you guys, great job, have fun being miserable people
guest chapter 1 . 6/23/2019
Drama queen
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