Amazing story! You should write more of this ️

You should definitely write this as a story!

Love the story. It's so cute. 333333333333

Love this One!

Wow! This was soo cute! Nice job! :)

I LOVED THIS! I absolutely love the Alec/Clary pairing, especially now that I can picture Kevin Zegers as Alec and Lily Collins as Clary, and I hate that there is so little of it on here. I really, really, really loved this!

ALec clary YAY

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I love this story! It was very well written. But try and fix the tense next time because that confused me a little. But other than that really good job :P

Omg... can I just discuss how perfect this is?! I ship Fraywood hardcore,, and this was just amazing! please write more!

Other than the spelling mistakes, the tense kept changing. Don't do that. Other than THAT, it's well written. You convey emotion and perfectly capture those awkward moments. And their feelings don't change too suddenly. That's always very strange. But you made it seem real.

Oh my gosh! You should just make a whole story out of this! it's so amazing! i loveeee it!

I LOVED IT. My only problem is that I love Malec too much XD but I still enjoyed it :) nice job

That was a good story :) one bit of advice though, is to keep your tenses consistent. You switched from present to past quite a few times, just in that little bit. Present tense means you use the verbs presently like looks or breathes instead of looked or breathed (past) you can use either one in writing (for example the Divergent series is written in present, while The Mortal Instrument series is in past) but you have to make sure you use either one consistently. This makes it easier and more pleasant to read. Just a tip, I enjoyed it :) keep writing and working :)

Love. It! I reeeally think that you should make a longer story out of this, it could be really good, plus, you would have me as a favorite. But, I love the pairing, its so cute!