Reviews for Fun With Transportation
Shadow22739 chapter 5 . 7/9
Such a nice story! I hope u continue it!
lany-chan chapter 5 . 10/6/2014
Awesome story! Continue pleasee?
FanFictionAddict2.0 chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
In the poll I voted for should continue story but after thinking about it, I think you should start over. So you could possibly make the chapters longer and to put in some more details for when they're visiting or going to a different island. I really like this story so I hope you continue/restart it again real soon. :)
DejDem chapter 5 . 4/23/2014
I like to see a rewrite of this tbh. There are a lot of great ideas here (especially bringing Vivi along considering she's an honorary StrawHat), but I would like to see the chapters be longer so we can see more character interactions between both the crew and the people they've met on their journey. If I did have any major criticisms it would be Luffy's character; I don't think he's the type to pour his heart out just because he's asked, but would rather just show his crew his home on Dawn Island. Also I doubt Luffy has anything against nobles in the entirety, more just the ones that have harmed his friends and loved ones. Also one thing bothered me was that they would use the last teleport on the dial to get Vivi back home, but then how would they get back to the New World? Really enjoying this story, and I'm definitely going to be following this.
Nefarious Matchbox chapter 5 . 3/20/2014
I love it, please keep it going! :D
moonl337 chapter 5 . 3/18/2014
I think you should continue where you left off
ichigo1508 chapter 5 . 3/15/2014
Good job! look forward to future updates!
general yumi chapter 4 . 1/20/2014
I love how you added the last part where Bellemere watches her daughter and friends. Please please please update as soon as possible!
MegDBrew chapter 4 . 1/11/2014
Aswome story so far please update soon I can't wait till we get to Luffy's island!
CrystalVixen93 chapter 4 . 10/19/2013
Can't wait to see what happens next so I hope u update again soon plz.
Blackgaz22 chapter 4 . 8/9/2013
please update soon this is really good. :)
Wolf and MR Lover chapter 4 . 8/2/2013
Are you gonna continue this?
doubledamn chapter 4 . 8/2/2013
Bellemere is one stubborn girl. Nami was lucky to have her, for however short a time. This is a nice story, I hope you enjoy your vacation, please continue after you get back.
doubledamn chapter 2 . 8/2/2013
There is a slight LuNa undertone, isn't there? My favorite pairing by far, unfortunately a little over done at this point.
10wolves chapter 4 . 7/11/2013
I am loving this Oi I hope you update soon, da? :D
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