I'm really glad that this is the first Steven x May fic I've read and you made me melt into a mush with this wonderfully written piece.ωTHE WAY YOU WEAVED WORDS IS JUST MAGIC. (And take me as a fool but I kiiiinda did go to Meteor Falls with Blaziken and Metang in hopes to find Steven. Hahahaha you moved me that much.)

The final line is fantastic and beautiful. The constant side notes also add their own touch to the story, nice fic!

This is so adorable. I'm literally a puddle right now. Thanks so much for writing this! We need more fics for this ship of this calibre :D

I loved this story, it's so beautifully written and accurate, I've been smiling all the time Not to mention how my heart started pounding when I reached the final part You know, I've just defeated Team Aqua in Alpha Sapphire and I'm already missing Steven, I truly don't want to challenge him at the League because I know that he will leave shortly after the battle ç_ç I have a huge crush on him and I needed to read something relaxing, funny and fluffy like this. I need to know that he will come back T_T
And then I found this jewel of a story, it filled me with warmth. I've read countless fanfiction (I'm a veteran as far as fangirling is concerned, I'm currently mastering the art of crying over fictional characters) but this goes straight to my favs list. It's rare to find a story containing both introspection, accuracy and fluff

Actually, I have a request of sorts: I would like to translate this story into my native language, which is Italian, and then I'd like to submit it to the Italian fanfiction website (EFP fanfic . net), providing all due credits, of course. I won't be doing anything unless I have your permission but if you're interested, please PM me and I will tell you all the rules. Just to reassure you that I'm not some sort of maniac, I'll tell you that I've already translated something from (you can find the link on my profile page) :)

Anyway, thanks for writing this precious DaiHaru story, I'll be reading it over and over again I hope you'll write more

This is soooooo CUTE! The lart where Steven thought he was hallucinating I wanted to go in there and slap him and shout 'For the love of Arceus! Just go and kiss her!'

That was really sweet, I love it a lot

i really really love this, i think it's beautiful! thanks so much for writing xx

This was really cute! So glad I stumbled upon this little fic; it's well done. I think it's one of the best HoennChampionShipping fics I've read. I do hope you write more.

Jalyss

Cuuuuuuuute times a million for sure

So beautiful, this final made butterflies fly in my belly!

Oh. Oh dear. I think I just found my new favorite Pokemon story.

this is so nice ahhh 3
with hoenn remakes around the corner, ive been getting into this ship
this fic is a gem (no pun intended)

This was such a pleasant read! I have recently fallen in love with Hoennchampionshipping, so it's great to see this!

this was lovely! I adore this pairing so much kyaaa ;-;

very nice and well written.