Interesting idea withe the spider powers yet every thing else is lazy... an unessassary OC and an over used pairing. And in the end nothing matters because you didnt change a thing... why constantly retell the same story with the same exact results?

Wait. I thought Koji was the mayor!/../...?

thank god i hate the hinata pussy lickers on this sight

I hope you'll be able to resume this neat story sometime soon.

Update ASAP Awesome work!

Not too sure here, if Naruto has KILLED all these people, then is it REALLY SMART for another shinobi to be running his mouth to him? Considering he's beginning to get USED to killing. And the rest of the gennin haven't even taken ONE life yet (well team 8 has).. Ex... Normal everyday person mouthing off to a SPECIAL FORCES officer?... See? NOT TO SWIFT!

1 jounin vs. 3? Zabizza would be a CURB STOMP!

Okay, well if you think of it that way... then how does this work for you "sasuke has to die in order to save the innocent jinchuriki that he will help to murder"?... And yes I KNOW he's not a part of the akutski YET, but just having those EYES and that EGO pretty much tells you what is EVENTUALLY going to happen doesn't it? Why not just save the time and trouble and squash him now? Seems like a logical line of thought.

If his strength is proportional to a spider, how the HECK did anko block him even WITH chakra? Spider man could lift 10 TONS at age 15! AND UNDER DURESS SEVERAL HUNDREDS OF TONS briefly!

naruto is Gary stu

Have a poll for what is in the chest

ok

hmm... he seemed to have forgotten his kage bunshin?
but, can the bunshins also have spider-sense and spider-web? if they do it would be awesome

So one of the chunin has the exact same name as the mayor of the village?

This story had potential. The Naruto and Hinata scene was cute. Too bad you seem to have stopped working on it. Oh well.