I don’t like this book for one reason is that he was forced to give up his hatred in a unnatural way. The sage of six paths literally just got rid of the anger instead of him naturally letting it go

Wow and I thought Mary to wasn't going to forgive that easy... Just another cliche fanfic I guess

This story is completly sucks in every shape, way, and form

The plot itself and mostly the subplots are in a way as if a child with a very narrow understanding of human relations writes a story. Villain talks bad about MC (refuses to say its Naruto), MC either beats up villain brutally or insults the villain in a "cool way" (Cue Sarcasm) by whatever cliche Naruto insults the author can plagiarize from. Those insults are praised as some miraculous eloquent face slapping, which cannot be rivaled by anyone, although in fact they are just normal insults that might happen in a normal naruto fic plagiarized from.

this fanfic pacing is bad and feels rushed and the battle are bland. The name's are kinda childish that it feels like it was written by a 13 year old. The characters lacks more depth and term's such and plagiarized from other series because the author can be original.

Very shallow. The MC is your alpha male do-it-all like Gary Stu. He's a veteran of the battlefield, knows every single jutsu and other superpowers from other series, blessed with martial arts and bumps into peerless beauties left and right. They get mad at him, but would blush furiously at his roving hands.

Plot? What plot? It's all about MC killing brainless annoying assholes with no self preservation and endless bashing while creating unnecessary drama. The entire set-up is about him killing people brutally with a brain of a unstable animal while having numerous women in his harem with tits bigger than the moon.

Poor Grammar. As says earlier, 'Repetitive description. "I was abused, I was abused" everywhere. At least use better words for your sob story.

Repetitive scenes. Something like this

Some mob thug/colleague saw MC and some hot girl.

"Hey, MC, I want to drink/sleep/walk with this girl. F*** off" while I try to kill you and make you our WMD

MC:

"What did you say, b******. F*** off"

Thug:
"Ha? Get the f*** off"

MC:

"No, it's you who must f*** off"

Thug:
"You are dead."

Thug throw a punch at MC. MC catch it.

Thug:
"W-What? B******, let go of my hand."

MC:
"Heh"
MC broke his fist/punch him in a stomach/take him by his throat.

Thug:
"What are looking at? Kill him, boys"

Some thug's friends want to beat MC.

MC's girl
"Noooooo! MC, let met help, but instead I'll just watch how awesome you are as you murder everyone brutally while masturbating your coolness. "

MC

"Don't worry, I can defeat them"
*Some onepunchman moves and other copyrighted moves*

MC
"Get the f*** off"

Thug
"Hmm, I've got more friends to try and bother you, we'll see how you deal with them later"

MC's girl
"Thank you, MC"
Kiss.

I understand that this scene is essential sometimes, but this is EVERYWHERE, EVERYWHERE, in EVERY CHAPTER, where MC and some girl (or MC saw some girl).

You need to rewrite the first chapter because you have konoha treating Naruto like he is a kid but he should 21 years old by what we have heard in the story so far.

when is the next chapter coming out. i really like the plot/story progreshin and story

"Another Kishimoto cock sucker, you screw off as well

Yes Freddy Kruger

ducking terrible with the sage of six paths and the gods

More pleases

love the story wish updates where faster though.

slow clap x3 well played -_-

Can you PLEASE make nore chapters I am in love with how good this fic is.

Starting to think I should come back but I don't know...

PLEASE KILL YOURSELF

update pls