Reviews for More Than This
C0ldSteel chapter 5 . 8/4/2014
So many lines of dialogue are missing their end punctuation—that's very distracting. Glad you updated; looking forward to the end.
rayalevell chapter 2 . 12/17/2013
Are you going to write the last chapter?! I really wanna know happens! :OOOOO This is such a great story!
rayalevell chapter 3 . 9/25/2013
Ooh! Are you going to write more? :DDD
Ben chapter 3 . 8/8/2013
Oh my... please update this little pearl ;-;
snicklelickinboot chapter 3 . 7/22/2013
Love love love this. Please update!
ShadowChild Of Death chapter 2 . 6/28/2013
Update soon please! This is really good and I want to know how Jim fixes the damage he's done or if Sebastian ever forgives him for being an idiot.
SebbyTiger chapter 2 . 6/20/2013
I adore this. Can't wait to read more.
CrabSecura chapter 2 . 6/15/2013
You. Have. To. Update. soon. or the suspense will kill me!
jlister 1997 chapter 2 . 6/14/2013
Wow, well this is really interesting. I like this new side of Moriarty, looking forward to the next chapter!
SebbyTiger chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
Ooh, I like this. Can't wait for more.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
Omg omg... poor seby!
But I love your story! Can't wait for more!