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AerynS chapter 14 . 3/28/2018 I love your storyline, but your grammar and spelling make me cringe. Your beta profile says you're a grammar Nazi? But I'll bet you need separate eyes to review the chapters. My suggestion to you is to get a good beta, a dictionary, and a thesaurus. You tend to confuse synonyms e.g. bear, bare; trail, trial, etc. I hope you take this as the constructively as it's meant. Keep writing! |
BrotNutella chapter 10 . 5/5/2016 Oh he will cut his hair the first time someone accidentaly sits on it or it gets stuck in a door or something like that. I mean really, it is really not beautiful and it is really stressfull to have so much hair. |
BrotNutella chapter 8 . 5/5/2016 Hey, I liked this story til this chapter. Then you made Harry ugly. I dont know what it is that so many authors made him hair that stops below his ass. It is just unpractical, ugly and you would think that he is a transfestite. I do not have any problems with transfestites but I dont think that Harry needs to look like one. He is a boy, or a man, and he will not change. BrotNutella |
ShadowCub chapter 1 . 12/1/2015 Yeah Lily you were a whore. |
kbbella chapter 1 . 10/13/2015 T |
Lou Snarry Lover chapter 18 . 6/1/2014 ooooooh, thanks for the heads up. |
Silverstargirl chapter 17 . 5/9/2014 Been there, so I do understand, though I wish it wasn't true. xD Good luck on the rewrite. If you could/would, please post the rewrite separately, so that this version isn't lost. Thanks. :D |
LovingFanFiction chapter 17 . 5/7/2014 will it alert us if were following that you reuploadd chapters? could you post like a ch.18 AN saying the new chapters are up so us following will know? thanks so much! good luck on your writing! can wait to read it! |
TinaMaki chapter 17 . 5/7/2014 Too bad, that was a cool story :( But luckily it's not as if you're abandoning it, so yeah..:) All the best and lots of motivation and dedication for your writing endeavors (this might sound weird in English, but as long as the meaning is somewhat clear...)! |
Death By Insanity chapter 17 . 5/7/2014 Just read all 17 chapters. That was awesome. I can't wait to see what you do with the new chapters when it comes out. I really like how the story went, but I can tell you that I can see how it could have gone in a different direction. It will be really cool. Though I do still want to see Lucius get freed from Azakaban and to see how Sev and Harry interactions go. I love that Hermione is totally cool with everything going on and takes it with a grain of salt. Again can't wait to see what you do. |
WhiteFang001 chapter 17 . 5/7/2014 I thought this current version was pretty good! But whatever makes you happy with the story - after all it's yours. Hope to see some chapters soon! I really like the ideas behind this story |
Devilish JoJo chapter 17 . 5/7/2014 Oh noes. I really really liked this story so far. Just please please don't abandon it! Love JoJo |
Flying Chrissy chapter 17 . 5/7/2014 cool! look forward to it! |
LivingRedRose chapter 17 . 5/6/2014 Can't wait to read the rewrite. always keep writing |
sarahbluerose13 chapter 16 . 5/4/2014 LOL :) I really like this story, it makes me laugh a lot! Hermione is Draco's mate right? I bet she is! Please update soon I can not wait for the next chapter. Your impatient reader -Sarah |