Please update soon! : )

This was awesome. Canbyou plz update it.I really wanna read more of this

I want Alicia to survive! It will be sad if she dis now when Fate still has her till now, only thinking of her! Sister complex is very unique and heart warming! Even tho I love Fate, as my favorite character in MGLN, I prefer her with someone like Signum, Hayate, but mostly Nanoha! I love the drama in this story! Fate is such a lady-magnet! I wish you update again! And I hope you aren't dead or you don't give up on this fanfic... Joking about the dead part, I know you can't be dead, right? *laughs nervously* Haha... But seriously I really want to encourage you in writing again(I hope I am encouraging you right now if you read this message). Mostly everything is up you, since you are the writer... If you ever come back to this fic, probably you can do something with Yuuno is helping Jail in "trying" to accomplish his plan in destroying TSAB... Like Yuuno is secretly Jail's cousin or something like that, and he wants a particular someone as his payment in helping Jail... I don't know just a suggestion for you to keep or throw away. Well I hope you are doing fine life, so good luck. And I hope you update soon; I read this story a couple times already so yea... Well bye bye

Update and please dont u dare abandoned it pls..

Update? Haven't heard from you in a long time.

That story is great! I'll waiting the next chapter hayate and nanoha find fate? will sigmun and fate talk about her past?

I love Fate's and Signum's interaction! ... to tell you the truth, I'm also a FateNum fan haha
I wonder what is that terrible story about?
I'll be waiting for the update! bye!

I know its your story but I thought Bardiche calls Fate "sir"?

Very interesting story so far. I like the OOC quality. I think that that can be a really fun part of fan fiction. I am also glad to see you revise your work and I did go back and reread the earlier chapters. I think if you want to improve that is one of the best ways to do it. The characters are more flushed out now. There are still a lot of grammar and language errors - but I would say for now move forward and run with your muse.

I am just amazed by all the writers here who have the willingness to put a story out there in a language that is not your own. Kudos!

Update soon

I like this so far, keep up the good work.

I look forward to more soon.

In Love & Light,

Zona Rose };-

Aww yes, Alicia is cute! haha I really like it when Fate has Alicia as sister. Hopefully she won't sleep for a long time again :)
I'll be waiting for the update, bye!

Great that Alicia is alive this way, Hayate can stick to her and then Fate will onl have one monster. Please update soon!

Poor nanoha will update soon

Aww I loved Fate's answer!
Carim: "Anyway there will be two cute girls living with you, isn't that something to be happy about?"
Fate: "No…" Fate-chan moaned from under her arms.

xD I couldn't help but laugh a lot!
Thanks for sharing and I'll waiting for the update