Aw, this one is sad. But it's heartwarming too. To know that despite what happened, Chance's brother is still there for him. I like stories like this, where something ment to rip them appart only brings them closer together.

I really liked this one. Its so sad. Poor Razor and T-Bone. What happens next?

You know i would never have found the continuing story unless this site wasn't blocked at my school.

You know, where Jake gets a translater and max is recuperating

-SPOILER FOR THOSE WHO DON T KNOW- and jake taught himn to fly. please post them here because otherwise i'll have to keep an eye out for teachers.

For some reason i can't find that website on my computer.

Anyway, great tennage angst for those different than the norm!

what a tear jerky tale hope you have a happy ending planned.

I LOVE it! Great story!

...Have I mentioned you're absolutely awesome with "what-ifs?"

Woah, this is great! I hope you plan to continue it.

poor Razor, hes a bug, how awful to be a bug. Good story though... the last line just kinda makes ya go 'awwwwwwwwww'

LOVED IT! Oh and Kris, I hope you update at your page soon! I cant wait to the next part in your fic.

*sniff* awwwww...I can't put in words what I'm feeling right now. It's a mixture of happiness, sadness and iquisitivness. That is a real piece of fine art, truely it is...*snif*..

This is a very good fanfic. But I only hope that it has a happy ending.

That final line melted my heart greatly. So sweet and vulnerable.. This fanfic is one I can honestly say touched my heart. This is a work you should be dearly proud of.

I loved it! Very sweet! :::sniff::: Poor guys...I feel sorry for them...

~Cybra