And sadly, you didn't finish this story just because only a few reviews were written/comment here. But the thing is you should finish this because that's the main reason you have to follow and do it. I love this story. Although there's a lot of loopholes still i appreciate this content and plot. Hope you got at least a motivation from my review to do the continuation of this story. Take care

Can u update soon?

please update again, i really like your story it is so funny, and i like it that ruka is not so timid, the teasing part is really funny :)

*shivers* Lady in Red makes me think of Ib. If you don't know it's this horror game, that i spent ages watching youtubers play. I got freaked out so much but I like it. I wonder if Shu-kun is the same compared to the past

i think it is weird that mikan is befriended with hotaru, ruka and natsume even though she thinks money, fame and power are the three most dangerous things. wouldnt she want to keep her distance from such people? i have my suspicion that mikan herself is/was rich as well, but thats just me... and natsume is totally obsessed with mikan i mean which normal people cut out a persons name from a piece of paper and then hides it :D hey, care to tell me what happened sfter natsume opened the door for luna? i hope you update soon

Hwah .. An update .. :)

Yay! I am the first to review on chapter 16.

Yay! I am the first to update on chapter 15

Hello!
Just like what u said by giving u a simple 'hi'.
Btw I enjoy ur story, and I want to ask some questions also. I believed that Mikan was rich before, by the symbol of swan and stuff, wasn't she? Will Hotaru transfer to Mikan's school? I still have some questions but I'm still confused to put it into words. So if u update again i'll give u another review. XD

To: Guest

Hello, dear!

I really respect your burning passion and eagerness to see Mikan and Natsume's love here, and I am sure that also goes to the other fictions you have already read. I am also a reader like you, and a certified MikanXNatsume fanatic. And obviously I would die to see them lovey dovey all the time, teasing and quarreling, but I want you to know and also to the other readers and supporters of this fiction that there is a plot that we are following.

Everything that is currently happening in this story, that begins with Chapter 1 until Chapter 14, has its own purpose. There is a process in everything.

As of now, if you are looking for the love scenario of our main characters here, I am sad to inform you that, THERE IS NONE YET. To begin with, this fiction is just starting to evolve, THIS IS JUST THE BEGINNING. But since we have finally put some scenarios that are needed in the story in the future, this is just the only time when we can finally develop the story to the next level.

Everything has a purpose, honey. Especially when it comes to Mikan and Natsume. You see, These two characters have strong personalities. Mikan is a bit naive and jolly, while Natsume is a bit cocky and aloof. They came from both different worlds. And if we want them to meet halfway, the best solution would be, is to bring them in a scenario where they will meet , they can grow, and start to fall in love, and that scenario is called PROCESS.

Before they fall in love or share their thoughts under the Sakura Tree, they must undergo in that process. It's going to be slow, but I assure that it will be worth it.

Moreover, in the manga of Gakuen Alice, you'll see that it took Natsume and Mikan to realize their feelings for each other, it took them more than 30 chapters before they became conscious of each other, and start developing weird thoughts and feelings for each other. That is because, Ms. Tachibana Higuchi (the author of GA) is aware of Mikan and Natsume's Personalities. That it is going to take a while to build their relationship. But since Ms. Higuchi has already foreseen the ending of its story, she started putting obstacles, and such in the story, to develop the personalities of Mikan and Natsume, and improve the atmosphere they were in.

I hope you get my point. If I have to make 50 chapters or 100 chapters of this fiction before I can finally satisfy my reader, I'll gladly do it. But I am happy that you have shared your opinion here, this will really help me to improve the story and generate more twist. Thank you, dear! _

- Kai No Greenmountain

I love itttt.
Btw mikan is soooo cute here

I don't really see natsume and mikans love for each other in this fic? Or is it just me? Idk! Please update!

hmmm .. a daily update huh.. nice chap.

To: Rndm Prsn

What do you think? Ha-ha.

Yup. Unfortunately, Luna hired some men to give the rising model/senpai a "lesson".
(Well that's what Luna thought on what she did.)

I just pitied the model. As you can see, Luna is just starting to show her true color. So please continue to support this fic. Thank you! -Kai No Greenmountain

Love ot