Reviews for What Shepard Doesn't Hear
scottusa1 chapter 6 . 6/5/2013
This was a great story, I loved it. Hope to see more like it in the future. Laters.
LilVy chapter 6 . 6/5/2013
Very nice story! Sorry you ended up being so rushed to get it finished. I look forward to seeing what other stories you come up with once you get home. Be safe. :-)
AngstyShenko chapter 6 . 6/5/2013
So very cute. You'll be missed! Nicely done.
Key chapter 6 . 6/4/2013
This conversation was by far my favorite one to listen to on the Citadel. Imagine my disappointment when I discovered that it just looped, and there was no conclusion. I love your version so far-thank you!
scottusa1 chapter 3 . 5/31/2013
Great stuff. I hope to see more soon. Keep it up & Good Luck with whatever you're doing that is going to keep you away from electronics for 18 months. Laters.
LilVy chapter 3 . 5/30/2013
Whoa! 18 months? I would die. LOL

I do like this story. I like the whole idea of it. There were a few people in the games that I wish we'd been able to interact with, like this girl at the C-Sec station.

You are writing the story well. The first chapter was a bit short, so I didn't have a lot to say about it at the time, then I lost track of it till I found it again tonight. Mythique had a great idea about adding a his and her POV to each chapter, but with you only having 5 or 6 days left before you leave, then I suspect that would be too hard to accomplish. I'd rather see the story completed rather than sit for that long. And when you get back, perhaps you can add onto it, revise it, or just do a companion piece.

At any rate, good job and good luck with your time away.
avaiaal chapter 3 . 5/30/2013
aww this is really sweet.! :D good luck with the chapters!
Christine chapter 3 . 5/30/2013
Go, go, go! You can do it!
I'm glad someone's writing this bit. This was one of my more favorite side conversations in the game. :)
DaNinja chapter 3 . 5/30/2013
Excellent story cannot wait for more
AngstyShenko chapter 3 . 5/30/2013
18 months! I'm curious as to why, but here's encouragement to finish this little piece! I love gap filling!
MBP31 chapter 2 . 5/20/2013
This is nice. A little short though. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens to them.
tallgeese021 chapter 2 . 5/18/2013
I am so glad that someone started a story between these two characters. I recently took notice of them when I was walking by to see Kelly and I stopped to listen to them. Great work so far, I cant wait to read the rest.
AngstyShenko chapter 2 . 5/18/2013
please let this end happily :-)
AngstyShenko chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
This was one of those super sad conversations. I've always wondered what happened to everyone on the Citadel when the Reapers move it to Earth.
scottusa1 chapter 2 . 5/17/2013
Nice stuff. Hope to see more soon. Laters.
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