This. Is. AWESOME. Just gotta love Tina's personality, and how she interacts with everybody, especially Joe and Jamie. And Jamie kissed her! I never saw it coming so soon XD

Anyway, I know you haven't updated in a while, but I hope you do; I really want to read the rest of this :)

Cool story! It's very different and I love that last chapter! I'll be waiting for more!

I always loved the addition of farming rivalry in this game; at least to me, it was a big motivation (well at the start of the game, then you get too beastly for NPC Jamie to keep up with you). I remember when I first started my farm, when I didn't make much money, for the longest time I kept watching the rival thingy each time a day passed/whenever I thought I made a lot of money.

I remember being so hyped when I first beat Jamie. It was great!

just got into reading harvest moon fanfics, yours is awesome by the way. jamie is one of my favorite characters!

Really cute, it has a couple of errors though like in "Will you two shut up? Tina, have you seen you're ranch yet?" 'you're' is supposed to be 'your'