Reviews for First Times, Last Times
Electricgirl101 chapter 13 . 3/2/2016
Oh my god I love these so much! Ok, so I know I'm posting a review 2 years late, but I just recently got into this fandom and I can't get enough of these two! I love your writing style, and your ideas are so unique and original and it's great! This one shots really give me the feels, especially since I just saw this years Christmas special! Bravo, my friend, bravo!
Dramaticturnaway chapter 13 . 11/20/2014
Oh, I love that last sentence, it made me all wibbly-wobbly
Dramaticturnaway chapter 3 . 11/19/2014
This was really really really sad and really really really good. I liked it v much tho I got a tear or two in my eye ;')
Captain-Sherlock-Who chapter 13 . 7/28/2014
Amazing! You're a really good writer and I love how you write this fic! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Fettkat chapter 11 . 7/19/2014
Oh well written! This was so funny! he really is a mad man isn't he?!
DC55 chapter 13 . 4/24/2014
Oh gosh, well that little thing caused me quite a lot of emotional pain, so good for you! Wonderfully written, as always. Can't wait for the next one! :)
Guest chapter 11 . 4/14/2014
I love these so much! You are very good at writing these characters. Please keep writing (that is if you have ideas).
I actually just thought of a suggestion but feel free to completely ignore it. :-) The suggestion is both of their first times holding hands and running. For the Doctor it was in the Library and River's was some unknown time. It's just a little thing but I found the concept interesting and very them.
Thanks for writing,
Em.
DC55 chapter 12 . 4/4/2014
Wonderful. Loved the whole interaction between Eleven and Amy, very interesting take. Great job :)
astrakelly chapter 11 . 1/14/2014
i like this a lot, even the angst-y bits, which can often turn me off
BlueHummingbird101 chapter 11 . 1/11/2014
Love this little series! I love that there both light-hearted and melancholy. You've captured River very well - please continue! May I suggest that you do one about their first date and last date - I don't think you've already done one like that! :) Thx
DC55 chapter 11 . 12/24/2013
Aww, that was actually really cute. Great job! And I know, I love Alex, and I have no problem with how old she is compared to Matt, and it doesn't seem that either of them have a problem with it either. It's somewhat ironic when people complain about that and then don't realize that the Doctor is hundreds of years old than whomever they want him to be with. Oh well.
Anyways, great chapter! Can't wait for more, Happy Holidays!
Gaialy chapter 11 . 12/24/2013
A kiss would do it
DC55 chapter 10 . 11/30/2013
Wonderful chapter, as always, loved it. Great job! :)
littlesmith chapter 9 . 11/15/2013
I love all your stories
Zoubi chapter 9 . 11/14/2013
Beautiful, again.

Jealousy between them, with all those secrets and spoilers and ripping holes here and there... Seems logical to me that this kind of pain would happen at some point, and you made it so sweet. Not cheesy - definitely not cheesy, but rather... heartfelt. (Am I using this word correctly ? Still this little "being french" problem, see. Sorry again if there's any mistake in my review and all that, you were kind enough last time to mention there weren't any, hope it's gonna be the same in this one ! Whatever, back to the point.)
Heartfelt, yeah. Deep from her heart - I really loved River's part. I think I'm getting fond of the way you make her look, strong indeed but aware of her weaknesses. Human, actually, and a pretty decent one I'd say, far from the stereotyped-Rivers we usually read in fanfictions.
Time to stop babbling nonsense in this review, thanks again for this new chapter, I can't wait to read the next one ! Definitively one of my favourite Doctor Who stories so far. Hope to get more of it real soon !
(Also hoping the dark stuff you mentioned in your life this past week gets better real soon as well, whatever it is.)

May the Tardis be with you !
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