That's our Farfarello!

...This is exactly what I think Farfarello feels too...

I would like to start off with saying Arigatou! Thank you so much. This a very nice peice that shows him with more depth then usuall found in fanfics.

I loved the rhythm you set in the peom, though toward the end it seemed a little choppier. If you clean that up a bit it would be flawless.

Over all I loved this peice. This is an amazing work and I love it dearly. I hope you consider writing more poems such as this.

This one is a pretty darn good one !

It doesen't reflect Farfie's thoughts I think. I tnd to think a lot of epople think like that,so you can say it's pretty much based on real life,not only on a guess.

Gahhh...I'm being random again.I just liked it really much.

~Damage

*sniffsniff* poor farf... yeah good poem! it rymed! kimda.. well to me it rymed.. lol actually it doesn't but it had that rythmic poem ryminess going on... if u can understand that... ho hum

A wonderful depiction of Farfello via poetry. Try writing like that for the rest of the Weiss Kreuz characters. Keep up the good work!