-chortles- Oh, this was an absolute delight! :D I really love the characterization that you've given Hannah in this, as well as all the little tell-tale signs that Neville likes her (touching her cheek in the kitchen, running his hand over her braid later). Also, the details regarding the running of the Cauldron really added depth and a cemented foundation to a story that thrives on it. Nicely done! :D

Oh goodness I loved this story so so much! We know almost nothing about Hannah except her career and that she's a Hufflepuff, and I liked how well we could see the Hufflepuff qualities in her. Then Neville's whole attitude, I just wanted to jump write into your story and give him a hug! Their relationship and the motivation and encouragement he gave her was just too sweet, and I loved how they developed throughout the story. Really well written, you used descriptive language that got across every emotion perfectly. Definitely my favorite Neville story ever 3

Brilliance.