Oh god! This is everything that the film was lacking in. I like pepper /tony but here in this spin-off it would be so absurd. This is perfection.

I need more! It was awesome! And for the next one, since they're back in NYC, maybe the other avengers and a new girlfriend could make an appearance? All in all, great one shot. Amazing!

Interesting story... HATE the fact that you broke them up, not cool.

I don't like that they broke up here. But I loved your writing and this story just works. So well done!

Also, the whole movie was a disappointment for me...I'm a huge fan of the comics and there was no need to change it the way they did...pffft...oh well.

But again, well done!

HI, just wanted to say I really enjoyed this read :)

I saw IM3 17 hours ago. (I'm so sad that I actually kept track.) I cried when he threw it into the ocean.

Do you mind if I give you a prompt? I'm trying it as well; Tony Stark is Iron Man. But without the reactor, he isn't Tony Stark anymore.

Really good (I dislike Pepperony very much)! I loved it but wished, so wished, that it had a slightly more resolved ending.

I agree, it is a lot to throw into 30 seconds at the end. It was surprising that he was getting rid of the reactor. I guess I like to think he and Pepper are good for each other though. :) Excellent writing.

This is a very good one-shot.

you captured so much of what was wrong with the ending and made it plausible and logical ... lovely piece.