when you have a break ...

IN A FUCKING CLIFFHANGER

Wait you can say pussy but not shit? What the hell

If you can't curse this should be rated k

I just read this story and I'm already looking forward to the next chapter. Please keep going!

please make more chapters

this is amazing. I hope to be able to read more at some point!

Easy solution to the Daimyo; have Envy kidnap and torture all his secrets out of him while impersonating him. After he learns what he needs and has retracted the Daimyo's poor decisions, he'll kill him and his entire family, staging the man's death in the process. With that obstacle out of the way they can set up a puppet leader that does whatever the Kazekage says.

1: Why did Sasori present knowledge that seems useless to his killer? If he wanted to reward him out of respect, money or some of his techniques seem more reasonable considering Envy showed no sign of caring at all about Orochimaru.

2: Why did Envy show any respect to Sasori? That seems entirely out of character. Envy probably would have mocked him as he died and possibly defiled his corpse.

The censorship infuriates me, and I'm sketchy on your characterization of Envy, but I'm interested.

Keep up the good work I love how the story is going. And where's that rewrite you promised?

It would be cool of Naruto had a harem in this story given that he is the last male Uzumaki capable of having children due to the condition Nagato's body is in and that starting a family is one of the few things that he could care less about doing

Naruto with Hinata, Temari, Karin, Mei, Kurotsuchi and Yugito would be cool so he would be with a girl from each village

Tsunami of wave and Koyuki of Snow/Spring would be cool as well to see paired with Naruto since they aren't used often

There is Fuu as well but it never goes into detail regarding when Akatsuki captured her in the manga, in the anime it's a filler arc

Damm bro i thought you were doing well so far. But to cut it off at that point is beyond messed up.
You can get revenge and not be a total monster doing it you know. I was really looking forward to seeing how he handled hinata in that situation. She would turn on that village in a heart beat if he revealed himself. Especially the way its current regime is running things.

*Continuing from the review from last chapter* ... Ohhh, Naruto IS Envy; I forgot. *Sheepish* ... Still, this will be an interesting read when you remake Jealous Fox. :D Can't wait. *Beaming*

It kinda sucks that you won't be continuing this, though, having read the reasoning in the next "chapter"/author's note, I DO understand why. :) I AM curious as to what the rewrite will be like though. *Beaming* Will Naruto be able to change Envy? Can't wait to see what will happen. :)

wow they are all so great ideas, but I must say my favorite are the following: Butler of Zero, The great naruto, The boy who lived with monsters, Smiling shinoby
you are awesome