Chapter 2 was hands down the best one shit, I mean one shot lol.

That was honestly the funniest shit I've read in a while. And yes, pun IS intended

hahahaha

Oh my god. I haven't laughed this hard in so long...I'm so excited to read the rest of your stuff XD

You've already had Neji appear, and Hiashi mentioned more than once. Why not bring them in the mix?
I've read a 'dinner with the Hyuuga' scene before, but I think you can kick things up a notch..or two...or more. :p

Also, maybe some interactions of Naruto with Hinata's team? Liiiike, I dunno. Something like maybe Naruto says something about Hinata which becomes lost somewhere along the way, turning into a miscommunication leads to multiple misunderstandings which causes chaos and mayhem with Naruto in the middle of it wondering what the heck happened? Then suddenly a whole lot of people get involved. :)

I know they aren't exactly original, but I feel like you can bring more humor into them.

Great compilation by the way! Looking forward to reading more.

Such a dork... This was funny.

Konohamaru is a pervert! This was really funny.

I couldn't stop laughing!

Funny! And they did the thing twice? Oh my gawd.

the pun at the end was great

this is soo funny. it's always the quiet ones. poor hinata. Hahahaha

XD omg

So I was in the middle of reading Entwined by Love, Enslaved by Fate when it occurred to me that I really enjoy your perception of NaruHina, and since the plot was really moving in that story, I found myself missing some of the more fluffier moments. I decided to take a look into your profile, thinking you had other NaruHina stories and what do I find? This little gem!

I'm really not too fond of one-shots (because they're usually short and that makes me sad) but I do so enjoy a collection of them. Here I was expecting something super fluffy and diabetic inducing, instead I get straight up comedy.

I LOVE IT! I always figured that their relationship would be funny as hell because, let's face it, the show has a tendency to be funny as hell when it's not trying to be serious. So every single chapter was like watching a filler from the show, which is fucking awesome by the way.

First of all, chapter 2 killed me. I thought that was hilarious!

Chapters 5 and 6, the prank war between Naruto/Hinata & Konohamaru/Hanabi-oh my god. Yeah. That's gold right there.

The public bathhouse chapter (I forget which one that was) made me roll in my chair XD

The cave and the cat - XDDDDDDD

Priceless!

Anyway, I noticed you haven't updated this story in a while, which is a little saddening since it's such a jem, but I know it's because you're mainly focused on Entwined. I'm still in the middle of reading it, but I like to take my time with lengthy stories so you won't see me reviewing that sucker until I finally catch up. In the meanwhile, I'm sticking this on my alert list.

You still have some minor grammatical/spelling errors littered throughout the six chapters. It's not really a big deal but as a stickler for perfection, they jump out at me. I wish I could be a little more helpful with pointing out exactly where they are, but because they're so minor, I can't recall. I just know that every chapter has something.

Other than that, this story is hilarious and wonderful. Thank you for sharing!

Holy shit! I died laughing it was so good! Keep up the good work. -UltimaDemon9

PLEASE READ THIS :)

Hey! Lover,reader and gargantuan fan of your fic 'Entwined by love, Enslaved by Fate' hirr. Ive been reading that fic since June and now, sad to say I've already reached it's current chapter which oddly means I'm gonna wait for updates starting now. ( and I beg you please update chapters a little earlier) Still, I know its so worth it, so I'll still read bec. your fic really does, carries me onto another life and it was really the first and ONLY fanfic I've read ever since birth :'' (My Naruto Addiction brought meh here) And no wonder, it was my FAVORITE, even though I still havent tried any other fanfictions out there. So I decided to read your other fics while I'm waiting updates from my real 'FAVE FIC'. And on with 'Just One of those Days'. I've seen this fic of yours on your authors note at the 'Entwined by Love...' (you know ya' did a little endorsement) :'' so I decided to check it out. And its blastoff. Love it. Its so nice. But there are words being cut and forgetten (so it often became so hard to understand a phenomena bec. some words are missing) Please fix ;) Alright. Off with the blabbings. I really wanna make an own account now, here in , so I can favorite/ follow you and your fic :' and PM you sometimes. And specifically. What's your full name please? :) I just really wanna express my gratitude to you and your betareaders, inspirations and etc. staff. Bec. ya guys really give me another life every fic of yours I read. Its so adventure, love, scenic scenes -filled :* Now, byye! Till next review.

Oh my goodness, I just had a good long laugh! I love it!