Damn the feels at the end.
Also nice Notes3.

Hola me encantó este fanfic lo ame espero con ansias otro itasaku.

I. Love. This. And Kisame's "I hope it was the girl"? Absolutely priceless!

I always come back to this story.

Nice

OMG THIS FIC WAS SO FUCKING GOOD! MOAR PLEASE! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MAKE MORE CHAPTERS! ehem.. although i do have a theory to why itachi is alive... When Sakura found him dying her team mates probably were nearby n she had to rush to their side thinking that itachi died already. But his heart was still beating although faintly. Someone(madara perhaps) found him n decided to revive the uchiha n use his abilities n control him but after itachi recovered He killed that someone and headed to usagi chan! :3 :3 another theory is that hes still dead and is in edo tensei mode. :3 :3 :3

Awwwwwwwwwww fuuuuuu-DO YOU KNOW I ALMOST CRIED WHEN ITACHI DIED IN THIS!?
This was magnificent!

this is really good! i hope its a multichaptered or has a sequel.. i would love to know what will happen now to their family..
and also, are both kids itachi's?

aww I love it!

Ummmm...I so totally loved it, except for that damn ending!

Sequel please!

As much as I enjoy ItaSaku as the next person, this seemed more like a purely physical relationship. Your words certainly give this feeling that there was a deeper bond than that but those depths were hidden under the physical seams as if you had omitted them to keep to the story's theme of carnal pleasures. There's nothing wrong with writing sensuality from beginning to end but there has to be something that keeps it altogether, especially if love is involved. You did try to write how at some points, they wondered what they were doing but it was more like a passing thought - there were no true conflict in their emotional range before they simply got it on again. I will concede that for writing purposes, vagueness can be a pretty nifty stylistic tool in storytelling but taking this story as a whole, the sexy-timez just overwhelms everything and I felt like I could just plug in any character for either Itachi or Sakura.

I hope you take this as a constructive criticism and not some blatant tar thrown at your writing. You definitely have the writing potential - mayhaps you were inspired by the author sasukes on here - but now that you have the bones down, it's the kinks in the flesh work that could use some tinkering with.

I intended to write something a lot longer elaborating my thoughts on each scene but I'm kind of stuck at just saying the same thing for every scene and that is "I love this so much!" I really do. Its very interesting and well written. I absolutely adore this! Wonderful job.

"I hope it was the girl."

That is honestly the best reaction you could have dreamed up for Kisame to say. It says wonders about his relationship with Itachi and has me giggling :)

i just read this twice before i could comment.
it was that good.

I've read this before, but I still find this a great series of short one-shots, and I love the happy ending! Kisame's lines were really funny, too!