| Reviews for First Husband |
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Guest chapter 1 . 12/11/2017 Great story, hard to find a good fit (if any fics) with my #1 skyrim lady |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2017 Story was great we need more male human and female orc stuff and i like how it was set up but in my personal opinion the ending wasent the best |
Rick O'Shay25 chapter 1 . 12/11/2015 A very well written story! Too bad it's short. And it's really too bad Dyce doesn't want an Orc as a traveling companion-wife. I think that would have been romantic. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/18/2015 You made me cry and I hate you but I also love you so my feelings are conflicted you twisted masochist |
pattie mayonnaise chapter 1 . 3/15/2015 Ok, I LOVE your Dragonborn. His more lighthearted nature was refreshing. The interaction with Borgakh was hilarious, amusing, and HOT, and I loved the idea of the cultural miscommunication between them haha. There was such great banter in this. Awesome job with the story, I had so much fun reading it |
MissDelight chapter 1 . 7/16/2014 Dyce getting married! That was too much fun. Especially loved hearing how life is getting on for Erik. |
SavorySchmaltz chapter 1 . 6/2/2014 Your interpretation of Borgakh is different from what I always imagined, but at the same time you make it believable. Even with your minimalist style of writing her inexperience outside of her clan is brought to light in a way I never even considered. While concerning you Dragonborn, it is difficult to imagine a player character besides the one we each create, but your Breton is so down to earth and likable. Besides you just explain his experience so well. All things considered, well done. |
Oh-lawd-he-hungry chapter 1 . 3/3/2014 Eehehehe that was awesome! You captured how I imagined she would act perfectly, I really liked this thanks! |
Shannon chapter 1 . 9/16/2013 I actually had an Orc "buy" a wife in my game. Also, I thought the jail scene was much more realistic than in game. |
bummersummer chapter 1 . 7/5/2013 You're my favorite writer omfg |
IamAdam chapter 1 . 5/11/2013 I. Loved. This. Funny, interresting, completely faithfull and accurate to the game, AND it's realistic too! I will favourite this, and I will take a look at your other fiction later as well. Good job. |
oldtimeydude chapter 1 . 5/10/2013 I rather liked this. Also appreciated the fact that she had some hair on her body. Back then, body odor, body hair and all this shaving obsession that's taken hold of at least the US just was not around back then. The women were as hairy as the men! Try imagining that... |
magicalandinactive chapter 1 . 5/9/2013 Oh, this was absolutely wonderful. A bit of a long read for a one-shot, but since it was well-written and engaging, I didn't mind one bit. I chose to read it because I've read your other works with Dyce, and they're all so much fun. Borgakh isn't one that I've seen around in the fanfic realm too often, if at all, so I like that you chose to include her, since she really is a wonderful and under-appreciated character, and her interactions with Dyce were just too sweet. My favorite part was most definitely that in Cidhna Mine, and it was fantastic that she took on Borkul and defeated him. Well done! :) |