Well, well, well. A terrifying but in-character look at Robert Baratheon's obsessive mindset. Chilling.

Glad you wrote this.

This is a great concept.
I feel like this one shot really needs a sequel. I was wondering if you planned on writing one? If not, do you mind if I did?

WOW, this is an amazing story, but what happens afterwards? Will you ever write a sequel so we CAN know how Ned reacts to this?

Wow i loved this story why it can be more, i would love and totally read a sequel!

I don't remember if I ever reviewed this before, probably I did, as I'm sure I read it. Maybe on another website, is this possible? I definitely remember how amazing it was, how I fell in love with it. Do you think you could ever come back to it?

if no one knows jon is targaryen, how is he in the book?

Absolutely adore this one-shot! I know you planned to stop it there but I beg you: continue! continue! continue! :D

Excellent start to this story...I hope to read more.

The last two sentences were really powerful. I know this is a one-shot, but ... I really would love to read more X'D

Loved it
This was amazing

This looks promising. And bloody. Oh, please, please don't harm the Starks Martin already does that a lot. Well anyways, love your narrative way, it's really enchanting. By the way in the last part when you wrote "He does not care...he does not care" I was like "And I don't care if you're the king touch them and I kill you". It's practically the same feeling that I get sometimes reading ASOIAF. Good work!

So the North against the South it looks like it's going to build up to.

My oh my. Ned had better be ready for war.

Oh, *my*. What a beginning! I utterly cannot wait to see where this goes, and how Ned reacts to the coming murderous (attempted?) rampage.