Obi-Wan's aura of smug... It's blinding me :D

Congratulations, General Kenobi. Your capture has warranted the deployment of legions of heavily-armed shock troops - tens of thousands of men and hundreds of thousands of probe droids sweeping sector after sector, level after level, in methodical door-to-door searches, with attached speeder bikes, light walkers, and presumably gunships on overwatch.

The scale of a manhunt on a city-world like Coruscant boggles the mind.

I really like how you weave the background of the ongoing galactic war into your story.
Changes to the Jedi curriculum are a logical consequence of shoving 14-year old Padawans onto the front lines as fast as younglings can come of age. In addition to combat-specific skills, Jedi will need extensive education in the arts of war. Basic tactics, up to brigade and divisional level - infantry, armor, aerospace, and space, the military ethos, logistics, and a zillion other niggling things that make a war machine tick - younglings and Padawans will have to learn them all, and do it in less time than it takes to train a regular infantry officer to lead a platoon of forty men.

Palps' scheming is so much fun to read about...

Off to fight, and off to die on some far-off battlefield... isolated, alone, and unable to influence events in the capital.
Classic.

I love this!

in the sequal could you also do a bit of obi wan and the other councilmembers preferably the ones who got hurt in their hunt for obi wan and the others including mace focusing on forgiveness and friendship bonding and maybe a bit of sceptical weariness where obi wan is a bit jumpy and constintly expecting someone to attack him perhaps a few nightmares of the events regarding the counsel thinking he is a sith mostly want to see the first part of the message (the bonding and forgiveness with counselmembers part).

I had a blast reading your story! I loved the action, plot, character voices and I felt bad for Obi-Wan and Ahsoka that the Order turned on them so quickly. :(

I love this story. have reread it. I would love to read the sequel if you write it :)

I'm rereading this story (for probably at least the tenth time) because it's probably my absolute favorite Star Wars fanfic. So I wanted to comment again to let you know how much I appreciate it!

Awesome story! I love your writing!

Poor Obi-Wan

I loved it! What a great, great story! Asajj, Ahsoka and Obi-Wan really make the best team

This is just great work! I binge read this in one whole day, and I don't regret it one tiny bit! It kept me interested throughout the whole storyline, and the intensity of the ending had me incapable of focusing on anything else! this ending really was amazing, and I CAN'T WAIT to see what you have in store for us!

So way to go!

-Queen

I love this story and I pmed you, I just wanted you to know, I know a lot of people ignore it.