The "mystery elves" were clearly Elrohir and Elladan, sons of Elrond. Come on. Any die-hard Tolkien fan could tell. I do love your story, though!

So what is the phrase? I haven't read the trilogy in a year. :(

This was a charming story. Just perfect in every aspect. Loved how you did not drag out on the part where they are separated in the end, like many authors do. The reader KNOWS they will be together so it’s no point dragging. This was perfect, absolutely perfect.
Thank you!
Next: Kingsfoil and then I will re-read your new version of Building Ithilien.

”Ilk” shall be my new favourite word.

You write so beautifylly. Your language is like poetry. I love every bit of this so far.

This is going to be good, i can tell. Got a tip about your stories via Wattpad but I prefer to read here.

From the moment I read chapter one, I knew this story was going to be quite the ride, and it did not disappoint! I loved you idea of Legolas being this shy, reserved nerd who longs for adventure. It really was an interesting plot twist.
I also enjoyed your OCs as well. The contrast between Thaliniel and Narylfiel was so funny, it really does accurately portray how different siblings truly are from each other.
I look forward to reading more of your stories, so keep up the good work!

Oh dang. I’m just figuring out that this book is like some kind of prequel for Kingsfoil, which is seriously probs my all time fav Thranduil fic. Wow. Mind blown. And Narylfiel throwing the knife in this scene?! Like legit goes with stuff in our other book. . Wow. Seeing how it connects. I have chills.

Such an easy and lighthearted romance. Thanks for writing this.

Funny thing I’ve read kingsfoil about 4 times and it was until halfway through this story that I realized the connection.

At the end of the chapter, I... seriously want to kiss Thranduil. And give him a mug with "#1 Dad & #1 King" printed on it.

Thaliniel is a plucky and smart elleth. Barathion feels a bit like a caricature, though. It would be interesting if he was Legolas' equal, or near to. :)

Lovely story! so creative and funny.
Thank you very much for publishing it.
Narylfiel might make a good future wife for Thranduil.

This was hilarious! I laughed until it hurt my stomach.

I am so enjoying this story. I absolutely love your writing and would enjoy anything you write, particularly about King Thranduil.
Next story...Thranduil...YES! YES! YES!...Please...

I was wondering what had happened to Barathion. He really did not take the news too well. Thankfully Narylfiel came to the rescue - again ;)