Good story :)

This was such a good story! I really loved Hermione and Sirius is romance. I really like how you didn't make it so that Hermione had to do everything on her own. a lot of time travel stories do that, it doesn't make that much sense to me since in reality she is a child there are a lot of adults in the order already. I also like how you saved both Peter and Severus. You have done a spectacular job here. I think I've read this before, but it definitely deserves a second reading. Thank you so much for sharing. You're a very good author.

Loved this story. Thank you!

Second time reading this. Still as awesome as the first!

Okay, good start but a few minor mistakes that could come back and bite you in the arses. If it is September of 1978 the Marauders would have already graduated, and old Voldy returned in June of 1995, for months shy of 14 years, not 18 years.

woooooooo! awesome story and an adorable ending! :)

What were first years doing in Hogsmeade? That is a privilege for 3rd years and up.

That was very enjoyable. I love the time-travel fics with a Hermione/Sirius pairing.

How can Lily and Alice get pregnant so late? Both Neville and Harry would need to conceived either late October early November to be born at the end of July.

This was an amazing story. Your characters were so perfect! Hermione was fierce, but not ridiculous. While the muarerders were wonderful. I can't thank you enough for taking the time to share this with us.

"I look terrible in stripes" just made me burst out laughing! nearly woke my partner. Love it! So early on but I'm already hooked on this story!

Thank you for writing this!

I love how you wrapped everything up. And wow! Peter had 6 kids?! It made my heart warm whenever her was around, I need more good guy Peter.

I love that Harry and Hermione have a close relationship, and it was funny to see that Ron fancied her daughter.

I just loved this whole story.

I love when Peter is brave and good. This made me cry, i hate to like Peter, but so far I love him, and he's only had a few lines! I can't wait to read more!

I really really really enjoyed your story! It was very well done! Loved it!

Enjoyed this very much. My only complaint is that Hermione should have had more symptoms of PTSD and survivor's guilt. Please keep writing.