Reviews for The Betrayal
Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2019
hate this story wish Jason dies
Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2018
Hate it. Jason is not Tommy friend you don't do that and sit there listening to him pouring out his heart to you and just sitting smirking the whole time. Jason got with Kim because it was the only way he could beat Tommy. I hate Jason always have.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2018
Hate it. Jason is a bastard he had all the chances before Tommy came to town that is not being a good friend while listening to them trying to figure out what happened and knowing you are with their girl thats being a bastard.
Lilac Shimmer chapter 1 . 2/27/2017
The smut was pretty hot.

It's not an ideal way to get together. I wish Kim hadn't of cheated, but it's great that she and Jason found each other.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/10/2017
Great story, u should keep on adding more
Love Jason and Kimberly together,they are my favorite Power Ranger couple
Guest chapter 1 . 1/14/2017
Great work, wonderful insight. I read that it's a prequel and I loved that you wrote this. I'm also really glad that you made Jason Kim's other guy. I love stories where it unfolds just so.

I think it's brave of you to venture into Jason/Kim territory, but there is a strong thirst for this coupling out there, and sadly so few authors who write about them. I'm very glad to have come across this one. I hope you write more. :)
Lizardphobia chapter 1 . 12/6/2016
Loved it!

And that ending. Wow. This is years old, but please don't stop writing Jason/Kim.
Cassie-011 chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
i like it!
MF 22 chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Wow, I probably would've knocked Jason's ass out (but not kill) for that betrayal, after finding out about it. Rather than Jason and/or Kim actually talking about these concerns with Tommy, Jason decides to fuck his "brother's" girlfriend? If he loved her from the beginning, why didn't he say anything? He had plenty of time before Tommy even entered the picture. Truth is, he was a coward. Both in keeping his feelings secret until she was with someone else, (and it's not as if Tommy treated her poorly, thus raising legitimate concerns about the relationship; that would've been the only acceptable reason for Jason doing that while she was with Tommy) and for making a move on his "brother's" girlfriend, especially when he KNEW that she was still with Tommy. How can there possibly be forgiveness for the depth of this betrayal? How can there be any atonement? But I guess this means that Tommy can truly be with Kat, who could become what Kimberly should've been: His soulmate.
Delysia chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
I really enjoyed this. It was an interesting take on how it could have all happened. I've always been very interested in the Jason\Kim\Tommy dynamic. Wonderful work!
andyg2525 chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
this is great but bad at the same time on how Jason and kim could do that to tommy ,but that is life
TommyH chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
I loved it
Opalbrat chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
Love this. :) It would explain why they never mentioned any of the originals after they left. Heck they even stopped mentioning Kim as soon as she left for Florida up until she wrote the letter.
brankel1 chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Excellent. Hope Kim will follow him.