Wow this was an amazing read !

I read your wonderful story and really enjoyed reading it. Afterwards I read your bio, you started so long ago writing. This story stands the test of time. I now must read the others to see if you have more original storylines! Thanks for writing this so long ago.

Oh so sweet thanks for a very good read but sad also

Not bad : )

This is.. I'm just... I'm lost for words.

Beautifully written, admittedly the grammar could use some work but you captured exactly the attributes of both Jane and Lisbon. I literally could see this happening in my head as if it were shot naturally as a part of the show. Hats off.

I especially loved the reference to her being his distraction, just as he didn't want her to be his distraction previously. Oh, and I liked the correlation between both Patrick breaking the rules and also, Red John breaking them too. I fangirled a little too hard I must say.

Nicely done.

:)

The bezt thing ever

Awwww!
I saw the "be MY distraction" bit and immediately checked the rating. So glad you didn't turn this to anything above a K
As much as I want them to be together, it was the wrong scenario. You wrote the ending perfectly. Thank you! :D

Sweet! Well done :)

Loved this! Great job!

Awwwww! This sooo cute! :3
I also just wrote my first Fanfic!
But yours is so heart-warming!
Keep it up!

Yes! I was so waiting for someone to write about what that man said to Lisbon! I love your one shot! Thanks for sharing!

I liked this story a lot. very nicley done!:)

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Ugh!if only this had been in the episode! Great job, sexual tension city! :) thanks for sharing :) xx

LOVE THIS! these two lovebirds really should stop pretending and just go for it :)