awsome

you should write more

"getting on Garth's bad side could be almost as bad as getting on Eve's."
i like this detail. you've demonstrated it once before in garths fight in "Perils." Fun!

" but it's just, she looks like a roll of Bounty already,..."
Haaa!

hey, Kate's doing a pretty level headed masterful job here. awesome!

come on, somebody slow down and get Lilly's side of things, please; Lilly, now would be a good time to speak just slightly more assertively.

"I'm guessing there's nothing in the pack laws about an impartial judiciary," Humphrey grumbled.
Again, lol

"Garth," Kate said, "if you make this an Eastern Pack trial, you'll have to appoint somebody to defend Lilly and somebody to prosecute her. And do you really want to trust Claw or Scar or Edgar with that responsibility?"
Kate is on top of things today!
nice job thinking up this political dynamic, too. very well put together.

So, reluctantly, Humphrey took Garth's paw and shook it. "Nice to be, uh, working with you, partner," he said.
Yes! i really want to see how you write this duo.

"But why won't anybody listen?" said she. "I didn't do anything!"
Lilly, someone ought to explain to you what a trial actually is. it doesn't mean your guilty. that said, still no one has bothered to stop and ask for your side of the story. letting it come out for the first time in a public and uncontrolled setting with only one shot seems like a bad plan. also, getting lilly to recount her side of things confidently to a crowd who will most likely shout her down on numerous occasions will be hard... better to know before all that starts, in a private setting where she can speak better and in relative safety.

{!} the blood is evidence... Claw already messed with it by wiping his paw... will that be significant?

interesting... and i cant wait to read how Garth and Humphrey deal with working together.
Later! -Sarge

me gusto la historia bueno me encanto sigue adelante y avísame si lo actualisas

Lilly is innocent! She must be!

I hope so, that Lilly is not the one.

I know Lilly could never do that. I like how you bring this story to life with a good sense of crime detail.

Yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay! I've been waiting for this and I'm am so pleased with the chapter!

Lilly is innocent! She didn't do anything!
Anyway, I love this story, it's awesome. Lilly is going to have a really hard time with all this, I just hope she can be prove innocent, I Know she could not kill even a squirrel.
Well, that's all for now and I'll be waiting the next chapter, good luck and see ya later.

Dang. Nice chapter

I love your story. Please continue.

Cmon, please continue this story, its awesome!

crazy

"and… flammable…."
Kate is a pyro... *giggles like a five year old with matches* YES

"Wait…. Claw's a girl?" now THAT is new. what, if i may ask, was the inspiration for that one? Nice idea.

"in the end"? oof... Garth, you're gonna get it soon... why must you write him so? but i guess that will be worked out later.

living with the poet sounds hard. lots of different prejudices involved in this story.

As for the murder... well, well,... should be fun! how will Garth respond? plenty of interesting characters to suspect and wonder about. Who done it... [since we all assume at this point that it wasn't Lilly] [right...?]

Very mysterious story...that is worth reading!