This is good... very original. You really should finish it. :)

Poor Bilbo and Thorin with their misunderstandings. How old is Bilbo here? Good start! His poor fence though

What possible hardships?.. Orcs, and deaths.
Good day, good night, and good luck, Bilbo, Thorin.

ESTA BASTANTE INTERESANTE!
quisiera leer mas!

The story's okay, but it's not worth reading if it takes you a half a year to post one measly chapter. Figure something out. It's the least you could do for fans so we don't sit with our thumb in our asses.

Once-Again-Annoyed-By-A-Fanfiction-Writer

Intriguing. I have a feeling there will be more misunderstandings between these two before the story is over. More please?

Love this fic. Wow its a surprise to see an update after so long but Thank G. LUV this story so sad so happy so everything . please please continuse

New chapter! So glad you updatet, Your story is very promising. Like the way you describe Thorin.

Ouch, that last comment on Thorin's side was not very nice...
But I'm totally overjoyed at seeing that you posted a new CHAPTER!
It's been a long time and I admit, I lost hope on ever reading another part of the story between these two...but I'm nearly bouncing while writing this (no way to say this too often) and I'd truly love to read more!
Hope you continue this on a regular basis!

I like this a lot. I hope to read more soon!

Wow! I have to say I'm a bit shocked you updated! Pleasant surprise, that. :)

Really brilliant premise. After all, it couldn't be easy facing what Thorin did and if any race would overcome suspicion, it would be a hobbit with Took tendencies. I look forward to future chapter updates! :)

okay I will admit you have me interested :D I do so like stories were Thorin isn't a complete plank

Really liking this fic so far :) Can't wait for the next part!

Haha! Yes, Thorin has that affect on everyone dear Bilbo.